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The writer wants to add more information after sentence 4 to further explain the idea of feeling relaxed and energized. Which sentence would best fit this purpose?

• Fresh air can also help people feel more connected to their surroundings.

• People who exercise outdoors often report feeling happier.

• Being outside can lift a person's mood and make them feel more awake.

• Staying indoors for long periods of time can make people feel restless.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

Which sentence could be added after sentence 6 to further develop the paragraph?

• In addition, studies show that reading helps improve concentration.

• This combination of benefits makes outdoor reading an excellent habit.

• Many people believe that reading indoors is the only way to focus.

• For example, reading by a window can offer some of the same benefits.

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CCSS.RL.7.2

The writer wants to clarify the idea in sentence 7. What is the best revision?

• Reading outdoors might be a way to focus better on the book you’re reading.

• Some people think that reading outdoors helps them focus better than reading indoors.

• In addition to providing fresh air, reading outdoors is also known for improving focus.

• Another advantage of reading outside is that it can improve your ability to focus.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

What is the most effective revision to sentence 9 to clarify the idea?

• Being outside means there are usually fewer electronic devices, which helps reduce distractions.

• When outside, people don’t often have to worry about devices or interruptions that distract them.

• Outdoor areas typically have fewer interruptions and electronic devices, allowing readers to stay focused.

• The outdoors, where there are fewer interruptions, is better for readers who want to focus.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

Which sentence could be added after sentence 12 to better explain the idea of reading outdoors being more comfortable?

• Natural sunlight also gives off heat, which is another benefit of reading outside.

• It’s important to find a comfortable spot to read in the shade when outdoors.

• Bright lights indoors can lead to discomfort when reading for long periods.

• Therefore, people may be able to read longer outdoors without feeling as tired.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

The writer wants to clarify sentence 13. What is the best revision?

• Finally, reading outside can help people appreciate the world around them even more.

• Another benefit is that reading outdoors makes you feel more connected to your surroundings.

• Reading outside is also great for helping people feel more connected with nature.

• Lastly, reading outdoors encourages a stronger connection with nature and the environment.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

The writer would like to combine sentences 14 and 15 to make the connection between ideas clearer. Which is the best way to do this?

• When reading inside, it is easy to disconnect from nature, but reading outside in a park or under a tree reminds people of the beauty of the world.

• Inside reading can lead to disconnection from the world, but reading outside can help people reconnect.

• Reading inside can cause disconnection from the outside world, while reading outside reminds people of its beauty.

• While reading inside can make people feel disconnected from nature, reading outside in a park or under a tree reminds them of the world’s beauty.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

The writer would like to strengthen the conclusion of the passage. Which of the following sentences should be added after sentence 17 to reinforce the main idea?

• Reading outside is an easy way to take advantage of nature’s benefits while doing something you enjoy.

• Reading indoors has its advantages, but outdoor reading can provide a new and refreshing experience.

• Many people don’t realize how helpful outdoor reading can be for both their mental and physical health.

• Outdoor reading is a simple change that can have a positive impact on your overall well-being.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

What is the most effective way to rewrite sentences 3 and 4 into one effective sentence?

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CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

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CCSS.RI.8.5

Which of the following is a clear and effective combination of sentences 11 and 12 from the passage?

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5