The Story of Buffalo Bill

Sentence 10 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 10 in a clear and effective way.

Which sentence should Jean add after sentence 19 to create the most effective closing for

her paper?

• That is why Buffalo Bill was the greatest.

• It is here where visitors can gain a true understanding of Buffalo Bill and his impact on

  American culture and history.

• Buffalo Bill is my favorite western hero.

• The museum is open year-round for visitors both young and old.

Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 3?

(3)​​​ (a)   Historians are not sure where his grave is, they are sure that

Buffalo Bill was a very interesting character.

• Even though
• Therefore
• However
• Finally

Which of the following is the BEST way to rewrite sentence 10 to improve the flow of the

paragraph?

• When Buffalo Bill was visiting New York, he saw a play about himself. One day.

• One day, when Buffalo Bill was visiting New York, he saw a play about himself.

• Buffalo Bill was visiting New York. One day he saw a play about himself.

• He saw a play about himself one day. When he was visiting New York.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 19?

• Change country to Country

• Change visits to visit’s

• Change visits to visit

• No change needs to be made.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 5?

• Add a comma after old

• Change Great Plains to great plains

• Change across to a cross

• No change should be made.

What is the correct way to write sentences 8 and 9?

• People began writing stories or newspaper articles about him; however they usually just

  made up the stories.

• People began writing stories or newspaper articles about him, however, they usually just

  made up the stories.

• People began writing stories or newspaper articles about him; however, they usually just

  made up the stories.

• People began writing stories or newspaper articles about him; therefore, they usually just

  made up the stories.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 1?

• Change buried to buryed

• Change quiet to quite

• Change Buffalo to buffalo

• No change needs to be made.