Revising and Editing Review

Rewrite the following sentence.

Some people search inside a twisting model of metal art, others walk past rows of wooden towers that stand like chess pieces on a chessboard.

• Some people search inside a twisting model of metal art. Because others walk past rows of wooden towers that stand like chess pieces on a chessboard.

• Some people search inside a twisting model of metal art. Others walk past rows of wooden towers that stand like chess pieces on a chessboard.

• Some people search inside a twisting model of metal art. Rows of wooden towers that stand like chess pieces on a chessboard.

• Some people searching inside a twisting model of metal art, others walking past rows of wooden towers that standing like chess pieces on a chessboard.

What change should be made to this sentence?

The sculptures are found at one of Europes most famous art

festivals called Venice Biennale.

• Change are found to found.

• Change Europes to Europe's.

• Change famous to famus.

• No change.

What change, if any, needs to be made to the sentence below?

However, the idea had started years befor.

• Change had started to start.

• Change idea to ideas.

• Change befor to before.

• No change.

What change needs to be made to this sentence?

I was looking for a magnificent sculpture,” Patricia said.

• Insert quotation marks at the beginning of the sentence.

• Change magnificent to magnifisent.

• Delete the comma after sculpture.

• Sentence does not need to be changed.

What change needs to be made to the following sentence?

Wanting to bring other European artists to the area creating.

• She wanting to bring other Europeans in the area to creating art.

• She wanted to bring other European artists to the area creating.

• She wanted to bring other European artists in the area to create art.

• No change needs to be made to the sentence.

What change should be made to the following sentence?

For instance, one sculpture was donated to a fire station and another is now displayed in a restaurant.

• Change instance to instanse.

• Change donated to donating.

• Insert a comma after station.

• Change is now displayed to was now displayed.

What change should be made to this sentence?

She explains, “we are making this art by using our imagination.”

• Change explains to explanes.

• Change we to We.

• Insert a period after explains.

• D Change imagination to imaginashen.