Sensory Details and Writing Study Guide

Which sentence uses the most vivid sensory details to describe a forest?

• The forest was quiet.

• The forest was full of sounds.

• The forest echoed with the chirping of birds and rustling leaves.

• The forest was nice.

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CCSS.W.9-10.3D

CCSS.W.9-10.3

Read this topic sentence: "Learning a second language can enhance cognitive abilities." Which of the following would be the best supporting detail?

• Many people speak more than one language.

• Bilingual individuals often perform better on tasks that require multitasking and problem-solving.

• Some languages are harder to learn than others.

• Language classes are available in most schools.

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CCSS.RI.9-10.1

CCSS.RI.9-10.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.1

CCSS.W.9-10.2B

Which revision adds the most vivid details to this sentence? "The city was busy."

• The city was very busy with lots of people.

• The city buzzed with honking cars and bustling crowds on every street corner.

• The city had many people and cars everywhere.

• The city seemed busy and loud.

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CCSS.W.9-10.3D

CCSS.W.9-10.3

Choose the most effective thesis statement for an essay on climate change:

• Climate change is happening.

• This essay will discuss climate change.

• Climate change poses significant risks to global ecosystems, economies, and human health.

• Many people are concerned about climate change.

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CCSS.W.9-10.1

CCSS.W.9-10.1A

Which sentence uses sensory language effectively? "The beach was nice."

• The beach was nice and warm.

• The beach was filled with golden sand, the sound of crashing waves, and the salty scent of the ocean breeze.

• The beach had sand and water.

• The beach looked good.

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CCSS.W.9-10.3D

Which word has a more positive connotation than "cheap" in this sentence? "The hotel was cheap but comfortable."

• inexpensive

• low-budget

• economical

• thrifty

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CCSS.L.9-10.5

CCSS.L.9-10.4

What is a more specific phrase to use instead of "interesting" in this context? "The book was interesting."

• somewhat engaging

• incredibly captivating with complex characters and unexpected plot twists

• kind of good

• just okay

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CCSS.W.9-10.3D

CCSS.L.9-10.5

CCSS.RL.9-10.4

CCSS.W.9-10.2D

Which revision adds sensory language to this sentence? "The soup was hot."

• The soup was very hot.

• The soup steamed, releasing a rich aroma that warmed my face as I leaned over it.

• The soup was hot and spicy.

• The soup tasted good.

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CCSS.W.9-10.3D

Read this topic sentence: "Exercise improves mental health." Which detail best supports this statement?

• Many people exercise daily.

• Exercise releases endorphins which can reduce stress and improve mood.

• Some people prefer running while others like swimming.

• Gyms offer various exercise classes.

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CCSS.RI.9-10.1

CCSS.W.9-10.9

Choose a word with a more positive connotation than "old" in this context: "The building was old."

• ancient

• vintage

• decrepit

• outdated

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CCSS.L.9-10.5

CCSS.L.9-10.4

CCSS.L.9-10.4A