Editing

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Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

Back

Change river to River.

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Mom surprised us all when she declared, "Let's all go get pizza!"

Back

Change "let's" to "Let's"

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Joseph knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.

Back

Change 'theirselves' to 'themselves'.

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Natalies' flower was the most beautiful I had ever seen.

Back

Change Natalies' to Natalies's

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Mrs. Watson stated our class would go on a field trip March 2 2015.

Back

Delete the comma after March and insert it after 2.

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Pledge of Allegiance is part of our monday morning assembly.

Back

Change monday to Monday.

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Matthew loves reading about animals, settling down with his magazine.

Back

Add a comma after animals.

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Headed quickly to the kitchen for my favorite dinner.

Back

I headed quickly to the kitchen because Mom was making my favorite dinner.

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When my Dad handed me the ketchup bottle, I shook it to mix it.

Back

Change Dad to dad.

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At Mariah's school, there are several books written in Spanish.

Back

Change 'book's' to 'books'