Revising & Editing

Front

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

Back

Change river to River

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Joseph said he knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.

Back

Change theirselves to themselves

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Mrs. Watson said that our class would go on a field trip on March, 2 2015.

Back

Delete the comma after March and insert it after 2

Front

The Pledge of Allegiance is an important part of our monday morning assembly.

Back

Change monday to Monday

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"I love to read about animals" said Matthew, as he settled down with his new magazine to read.

Back

Add a comma after animals

Front

When my Dad handed me the bottle of ketchup, I shook it thoroughly to mix it.

Back

Change Dad to dad

Front

Michael used colored pencils for the art project. Liam used paints for the art project.

Back

Michael used colored pencils for the art project, and Liam used paints.

Front

Sentence Combining: Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

• He was practicing his soccer skills because he found a stray dog.
• He was practicing his soccer skills, there, he found a stray dog.
• He was practicing his soccer skills; and then found a stray dog.
• He was practicing his soccer skills when he found a stray dog.

Back

He was practicing his soccer skills when he found a stray dog.

Front

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: When I opened my present I let out a yell? Options: Delete When, Change I to we, Change I let out to and yell out, Insert a comma after present.

Back

Insert a comma after present.

Front

What is the best change to make to this sentence: The father helped his children get into they're pajamas? Options: Change they're to their, Change father to Father, Change they're to there, Change helped to helping.

Back

Change they're to their.