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Which choice is written correctly?

• Finally, when I had to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game is when I agreed. To give contact lenses a try.
• Finally, I had to repair my broken glasses, following a particularly rough basketball game, then I agreed to give contact lenses a try.
• Finally, after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game, I agreed to give contact lenses a try.
• Finally, after after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game. I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

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Finally, after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game, I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

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Which choice is written correctly?
Options:
1. I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much, and the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creep's.
2. I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much and the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creep's.
3. I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much, the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creep's.
4. I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much, and the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creeps.

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I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much, and the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creeps.

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Which choice is written correctly?
Options:
1. "I can get you into contacts," she insisted every time she saw me.
2. "I can get you into contacts" she insisted every time she seen me.
3. "I can get you into contacts" she insisted every time she saw mine.
4. "I can get you into contacts" she insisted every time she saw me.

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"I can get you into contacts," she insisted every time she saw me.

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Which choice is written correctly?
Options:
1. She said, "that once I got them in, I would be free to make my own decisions."
2. She said that once I got them in, I would be free, to make my own decisions.
3. She said that once I got them in, I would be free to make my own decision.
4. She said that once I got it in, I would be free to make my own decision.

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She said that once I got them in, I would be free to make my own decision.

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Which choice is written correctly?
Options: We were less then a mile away from a doctor's office when I announced, "Mom I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing!", We were less then a mile away from a doctor's office when I anounced, "Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing!", We were less than a mile away from a doctor's office when I announced, "Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing!", We were less then a mile away from a doctor's office when I announced, "Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing."

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We were less than a mile away from a doctor's office when I announced, "Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing!"

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Which choice is written correctly?

• Returning to the optometrist's office, and within an hour I had took those contacts out and put them back in three times.
• We returned to the optometrist's office, and within a hour I had took those contacts out and put them back in three times.
• We returned to the optometrist's office and within an hour I had took these contacts out and put them back in three times.
• We returned to the optometrist's office, and within an hour I had taken those contacts out and put them back in three times.

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We returned to the optometrist's office, and within an hour I had taken those contacts out and put them back in three times.

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Which choice is written correctly?
1. Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds I love the freedom they give me.
2. Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds, which loves the freedom they give me.
3. Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds. Loving the freedom they give me.
4. Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds, and I love the freedom they give me.

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Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds, and I love the freedom they give me.

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Which choice is written correctly?

• Walk down crowded urban streets comes natural for most city dwellers.
• Walking down crowded urban streets came natural for most city dwellers.
• Walking down crowded urban streets comes naturally for most city dwellers.
• Walking down crowded urban streets comes natural for most city dwellers.

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Walking down crowded urban streets came natural for most city dwellers.

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Which choice is written correctly?

• They usually move quickly expertly navigating the busy sidewalk and making split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.
• They usually move quickly, they expertly navigate the busy sidewalk and making split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.
• They usually move quickly, expertly navigating the busy sidewalk and make split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.
• They usually move quickly, expertly navigating the busy sidewalk and making split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.

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They usually move quickly, expertly navigating the busy sidewalk and making split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.

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Which choice is written correctly?

• Working into chalk on city sidewalks. He creates startling drawings that appear to be three-dimensional.
• Working with chalk on city sidewalks, he creates startling drawings they appear to be three-dimensional.
• Working with chalk on city sidewalks, he creates them. The startling drawings that appear to be three-dimensional.
• Working with chalk on city sidewalks, he creates startling drawings that appear to be three-dimensional.

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Working with chalk on city sidewalks, he creates startling drawings that appear to be three-dimensional.