RACES Paragraph Revision

What transition should be added to the beginning of this first body paragraph?

• First,

• Moreover,
• In conclusion,
• Finally

How would you correct the citation correctly?

• In paragraph 24 in the article Dinner At Home Is Main Ingredient For Healthy Eating , we read, " 'Berry said if people are trying to make lifestyle changes and cook at home, it would be easy to improve the nutritional value of the food. For example, make potato or other salads with a vinaigrette rather than a mayonnaise base, and don't deep-fry anything. '”

• “Berry said if people are trying to make lifestyle changes and cook at home, it would be easy to improve the nutritional value of the food. For example, make potato or other salads with a vinaigrette rather than a mayonnaise base, and don't deep-fry anything.”

• In the article “Berry said if people are trying to make lifestyle changes and cook at home, it would be easy to improve the nutritional value of the food. For example, make potato or other salads with a vinaigrette rather than a mayonnaise base, and don't deep-fry anything.”

• In paragraph 24 you should eat healthy food. You should do other stuff to stay healthy. You should join a coding class. You should also take a class to learn about music. You should add all of these electives so that the students will be happy.

How would you revise the explanation correctly?

• This article expresses the idea that you should make sure that you are paying attention to the nutritional value of the food. One of the ways to do this is by considering unhealthy ingredients you can substitute for healthier ones.

• This paragraph tells us that vinaigrette is healthier than mayonnaise.

• Explaining how you should change up how you make food to improve the nutritional value of the food is because it could help the flavor of the food taste better than how it normally tastes when you use the same things to cook or make food, and it could also help with your health as well and your diet as well if you’re on one or planning on starting a diet. 

• This is why this is important so make sure that you do this like the article said.

How can you revise this sentence to make it clearer?

Having cooking classes can make many benefits with your food values and how it tastes and also your diets as well so you’re able to pay attention to what you eat and how you make the food you eat as well.

• Cooking classes are only for professional chefs.
• Cooking classes can improve your food values, enhance the taste of your meals, and help you pay attention to your diet and cooking methods.
• Cooking classes can make your food unhealthy.
• Cooking classes are a waste of time and money.

What is the main idea of this paragraph?

We should  have a cooking elective because  it can improve the  nutritional value of your food. I got my information from the article. “Berry said if people are trying to make lifestyle changes and cook at home, it would be easy to improve the nutritional value of the food. For example, make potato or other salads with a vinaigrette rather than a mayonnaise base, and don't deep-fry anything.” I don't know how to explain it.  Having cooking classes can make many benefits with your food values and how it tastes and also your diets as well so you’re able to pay attention to what you eat and how you make the food you eat as well.

• The main idea is that a cooking elective can improve the nutritional value of food.
• Nutrition has nothing to do with cooking skills.
• Cooking electives are a waste of time.
• Cooking classes are only for professional chefs.