Jeffrey's Poetry Slam Quiz

What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 8?

• But, as Jeffrey looked at the mounds of trash at the beach, he wondered how he could reach a different audience.

• But when Jeffrey noticed that the same people volunteered week after week, he wondered how he could reach a different audience.

• But while Jeffrey sorted stacks of mixed office paper at the recycling center, he wondered how he could reach a different audience.

• But when Jeffrey thought about his stage fright, he wondered how he could reach a different audience.

Sung-ho wants to improve the message of his text. What phrase should be deleted from sentence 10?

• Wanting his words

• to move people to action

• instead of bore them to tears

• for feedback

Which transition should be added to the beginning of sentence 13?

• Instead

• More importantly

• Every weekend

• Sooner than later

Sung Ho wants to use a more specific word than given in sentence 18. Which word BEST replaces the word?​ ​ (a)   ​ ​ ​

• share
• offer
• display
• show

Sung-ho wants to use a more specific word than was in sentence 2. Which word best replaces this word?​ ​ (a)  

• felt
• rested 
• sprawled
• lay