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Passage for Questions 1-3

Passage Excerpt:

The boy walked to the park. He played on the swings. The dog runned to catch a ball.

What is the best way to revise the second sentence of the passage?
He played on the swings.

• He played on the swings with his friends all afternoon.

• He was swinging.

• He played swings.

• He is on the swings.

Passage for Questions 1-3

Passage Excerpt:

The boy walked to the park. He played on the swings. The dog runned to catch a ball.

Which change should be made to the third sentence?
The dog runned to catch a ball.

• Change runned to ran

• Change dog to dogs

• Change to to too

• Change ball to balls

Passage for Questions 1-3

Passage Excerpt:

The boy walked to the park. He played on the swings. The dog runned to catch a ball.

What change should be made to the first sentence?
The boy walked to the park.

• Add a comma after walked

• Add a period after park

• Add an adjective to describe boy

• Change walked to walk

Passage for Questions 4-6

Passage Excerpt:

It was a sunny day, the kids was excited to go on a picnic. They packed sandwiches apples and juice.

Which change should be made to the first sentence?
It was a sunny day, the kids was excited to go on a picnic.

• Change was to were

• Change day to days

• Add because after day

• Change sunny to sunnyest

Passage for Questions 4-6

Passage Excerpt:

It was a sunny day, the kids was excited to go on a picnic. They packed sandwiches apples and juice.

What is the best way to revise the second sentence?
They packed sandwiches apples and juice.

• They packed sandwiches and apples.

• They packed sandwiches, apples, and juice.

• They packed some sandwiches.

• They packed a lunch.

Passage for Questions 4-6

Passage Excerpt:

It was a sunny day, the kids was excited to go on a picnic. They packed sandwiches apples and juice.

What change, if any, should be made to the second sentence?
They packed sandwiches apples and juice.

• Add a period after juice

• Add commas after sandwiches and apples

• Change juice to juices

• No change needed.

Passage for Questions 7-9

Passage Excerpt:

Sarah and her mom went to the store. They bought fruit, vegetables, and chips. Sarah sayed she liked the apples the best.

What change should be made to the third sentence?
Sarah sayed she liked the apples the best.

• Change sayed to said

• Change liked to like

• Add a period after best

• Change apples to apple

Passage for Questions 7-9

Passage Excerpt:

Sarah and her mom went to the store. They bought fruit, vegetables, and chips. Sarah sayed she liked the apples the best.

Which sentence should be revised to include more detail?

• Sarah and her mom went to the store.

• They bought fruit, vegetables, and chips.

• Sarah sayed she liked the apples the best.

• Sarah's mom drove the car.

Passage for Questions 7-9

Passage Excerpt:

Sarah and her mom went to the store. They bought fruit, vegetables, and chips. Sarah sayed she liked the apples the best.

Which revision best improves the first sentence?
Sarah and her mom went to the store.

• Sarah went to the store.

• Sarah and her mom went to the store to buy some groceries.

• Sarah and her mom were at the store.

• Sarah’s mom drove her to the store.

Passage for Questions 10-12

Passage Excerpt:

Last week we had a party. My freinds brang cupcakes. Everyone enjoyd the cake.

Which change should be made to the second sentence?
My freinds brang cupcakes.

• Change freinds to friends

• Change brang to bring

• Change My to I

• Change cupcakes to cupcake