Revise and Edit

• Delete the comma after long

• Delete the quotation marks after Samantha and add quotation marks after the exclamation point

• Change the period to an exclamation point

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.4.3B

CCSS.L.K.2B

• Add a period after book

• Change said to Said

• Add a comma after book

• No change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

• Quickly I jumped up, I tried to grab my books, but

  they fell out of my hands.

• Quickly I jumped up, and tried to grab my books,

  but they fell out of my hands.

• Quickly I jumped up, and tried to grab my

  books. But falling out of my hands.

• The sentences are correct.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

• Ella suggested we go to the library, we stopped at the store along the way.

• Ella suggested we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.

• Ella suggesting we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.

• Correct as written.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

CCSS.L.8.1C

• Change showing to showed

• Change that to something

• Change were to was

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

• Change help to helping

• Change hands and knees to hand’s and knee’s

• Change dropped to droped

• No change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2C

• Delete the comma

• Change and to I was

• Change hungry to hungrey

• The sentence is correct.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

• Change took to tooken

• Change soup to soop

• Change Grandmother to grandmother

• The sentence is correct as written.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1B

CCSS.L.3.1B

CCSS.L.K.1C

• Change important to more important

• Change an to a

• Change saturday to Saturday

• The sentence is correct.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

• Change most beautiful to more beautiful

• Change Maggies’ to Maggie’s

• Change dance to danse

• No revision is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D