English EOC Writing Practice

Julio did not write an effective thesis for this paper He would like to delete sentences 4 and 5 and replace them with two sentences that better articulate his thesis. Which of the following should he use?

• Wind turbines aren't anything new. They have been around for a long time.
• People come up with new ideas. And new ideas mean creative solutions for all.
• This wind turbine is unique. It can produce both energy and water.
• A wind turbine may be the perfect answer. Experts believe this is true.

Julio's transition from the second paragraph (sentences 6-13) to the third paragraph (sentences 14-18) is weak. Which of the following could best replace sentence 14 and provide a more effective transition between these two paragraphs?

• It's our job as young people to bring national attention to the crisis.
• We need something to assist with the serious water crisis we are facing.
• Today there are people who are illiterate about this situation
• Many people in the United States are unaware that such a crisis exists.

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CCSS.RI.1.2

CCSS.RI.2.2

CCSS.RI.K.2

CCSS.RL.1.2

CCSS.RL.2.2

Which sentence can Julio add after sentence 17 to provide additional support for the ideas presented in the third paragraph (sentences 14-18)?

• I cannot imagine having to spend any portion of my day collecting the water that my family needs to survive.
• Some must travel great distances for water, carrying containers that weigh as much as 40 pounds.
• Women and children are the ones who typically have to bear this responsibility.
• Water has to be found that will meet all the family's needs for drinking, bathing, and cooking.

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CCSS.RI.1.2

CCSS.RI.2.2

CCSS.RI.K.2

CCSS.RL.1.2

CCSS.RL.2.2

The meaning of sentence 22 is unclear. What is the most effective way to clarify the meaning of this sentence?

• Change this to it
• Change them to some analysts
• Change water to it
• Change main to primary

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CCSS.RI.1.3

CCSS.RI.1.5

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.K.3

CCSS.RI.K.5

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 26?

• It had been over a period of six months, the turbine produced up to 211 gallons of water per day.
• Because it had been over a period of six months, the turbine produced up to 211 gallons of water per day.
• Over a period of six months, the turbine produced up to 211 gallons of water per day.
• The turbine produced up to 211 gallons of water per day, this was over a period of six months.

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CCSS.RI.1.3

CCSS.RI.1.5

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.K.3

CCSS.RI.K.5