Editing and Revising

7.How should sentence 2 be changed?

• A: delete the comma after up

• B: change comes to come

• C: change fawcet to faucet

• D: sentence 2 should not be changed

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CCSS.L.2.2C

8.What change needs to be made in sentence 3?

• F: change without the to without no

• G: change contributions to contribution's

• H: insert a comma after scientists

• J: change there to their

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

9.What is the correct way to write sentence 6?

• A: Len Fisher is a scientist who has made a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

• B: Len Fisher, a scientist making a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

• C: Len Fisher is a scientist. Who has made a career out of researching ordinary things in life.

• D: sentence 6 is written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

10.What change needs to be made in sentence 16?

• F: change investigations to investagations

• G: insert a comma after combinations

• H: change teams' to teams

• J: no change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

11.What change should be made in sentence 18?

• A: delete the comma after milk

• B: change caused to causing

• C: change then to than

• D: no change should be made

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

12.How should sentence 20 be changed?

• F: change too long to to long

• G: change and to this

• H: change them to it

• J: sentence 20 should not be changed

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CCSS.L.3.1A

13.What change, if any should be made in sentence 22?

• A: insert a comma after surprised

• B: delete the comma after coffee

• C: change good to well

• D: make no change

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

14.What is the correct way to write sentence 23 and 24?

• F: Of course, there are people who argue that researching frivolous things like cookie dunking is a waste of time and money.

• G: Of course, there are people who argue that researching frivolous things like cookie dunking. It is a waste of time and money.

• H: Of course, there are people they argue that researching frivolous things like cookie dunking is a waste of time and money.

• J: The sentences are written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.5.1A