Slar Revise and Edit

What change should be made in the following sentence?

"What do I do first," I asked eagerly.

• change comma to a question mark

• delete the quotation marks after the comma

• change eagerly to eager

• make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

What change should be made in the following sentence?
" Make sure you don't leave any lumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.

•  change comma after lumps to a period
• change instructed to instructing
• change stired to stirred
• no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

CCSS.L.8.1C

What change should be made in the following sentence?
While I scraped my impatience off the griddle, Dad showed me what he meant by “solid bubbles” and then taught me how to flip the pancakes correct.

• Change scraped to scrapped 
• Insert a comma after bubbles
• change taught to teached
• change correct to correctly

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

What change should be made in the following sentence?
I look forward to the recess bell like everyone else, but every time I go Outside, I think about how recess could be even better. 

• delete but
• change Outside to outside
• change better to more better
• no change

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CCSS.L.3.1G

What change should be made in the following sentence?
Some of my friends play soccer or football on the field, but these unorganized games usually consist of one or two kids hogging the ball and everyone else just running around chassing them.

• change play to plays
• delete comma after field
• change chassing to chasing
• no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Last month, my entire family went to watch the super bowl in Houston.

• Delete the comma after "month"
• Change "super bowl" to "Super Bowl"
• Insert a comma after "super bowl"
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Lionel Messi, one of the world's best soccer players plays for FC Barcelona.

• Insert a comma after "players"

• Change "world's" to "worlds"

• Insert a colon (:) after "Messi"

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.9-10.2B

After finishing his homework at tutoring Marco went to the football game and enjoyed the rest of the night.

• Insert a comma after "game"
• Insert a comma after "tutoring"
• Insert a comma after "after"
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

While I wanted to go to Johns house and play Xbox, I knew that I had to study for my test.

• Delete the comma after "Xbox"
• Insert a comma after "knew"
• Change "Xbox" to "xbox"
• Change "Johns" to "John's"

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Michael wanted to eat pizza. Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.
What is the best way to combine the sentences?

• Michael wanted to eat pizza, but Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.
• Michael wanted to eat pizza, and Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.
• Michael wanted to eat pizza, so Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.
• Michael wanted to eat pizza, for Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A