After finishing his homework at tutoring Marco went to the football game and enjoyed the rest of the night.

Insert a comma after "tutoring"

Michael wanted to eat pizza. Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers. What is the best way to combine the sentences?

Michael wanted to eat pizza, but Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.

Michael wanted to eat pizza, and Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.

Michael wanted to eat pizza, so Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.

Michael wanted to eat pizza, for Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.

I should have gone to see the world cup in 2014, but I didn't have any money.

Change "world cup" to "World Cup"

Change "should have" to "should of"

In "The Odyssey," the god of the wind was a very mischievious character.

Change "mischievious" to "mischievous"

Change "mischievious" to "mischevious"

Change "mischievious" to "mischevous"

Q4. (16) Within a matter of days, we started to hear stories of others who had benefited from a spark of kindness. (17) The man whose fence we fixed told us how he helped another friend clean out her garage. (18) The kids in the after- school program for the residents of a retirement center made cards. (19) The elderly neighbor made cookies for a community bake sale. (20) And the single mom joined some fellow students who were spearheading a winter coat drive for the homeless. What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 18?

The kids in the after-school program made cards for the residents of a retirement center.

The kids in the after-school program made cards they were for the residents of a retirement center.

The kids in the after-school program and the residents of a retirement center made cards.

The kids in the after-school program of a retirement center made cards for the residents.

Q7. (12) The da Vinci consists of two main parts: a viewing and control console and a surgical arm unit, which contains several extensions. (13) To use the system, the surgeon makes three or four small incisions in a patient, and the surgeon then inserts stainless-steel rods into the openings. (14) One rod holds a camera that provides a three-dimensional video image. What is the best way to revise sentence 13?

To use the system, the surgeon makes three or four small incisions in a patient and then inserts stainless-steel rods into the openings.

To use the system, the surgeon, while making three or four small incisions in a patient, inserts stainless-steel rods into the openings.

To use the system, the surgeon makes three or four small incisions in a patient who inserts stainless-steel rods into the openings.

To use the system, the surgeon makes three or four small incisions in a patient she then inserts stainless-steel rods into the openings.

Q9. (20) What is the future of this new kind of surgery? (21) If the da Vinci can be controlled from 10 feet away, could it be controlled from 100 feet away? (22) What about 100 miles away? (23) Could this be a way to provide better medical care to people? (24) Today’s surgical robots are too large and bulky for these kinds of uses. (25) Furthermore, the technology isn’t reliable enough yet to be used for robotic surgery in distant locations. (26) Although these and many other questions are still unanswered, it seems clear that robotics will play an important role in the future of medicine. (27) It will be interesting to see how this new technology evolves and how it will affect our lives someday. Zane wants to provide more detail in sentence 23. Which of the following could replace sentence 23 and best accomplish this goal?

Could this be a way to provide better medical care to people in rural communities, war zones, or isolated parts of the world?

Could this be a way to provide and give better medical care to people who may really need it today?

Could this be a method for providing better and improved medical care to people who live in places outside the United States?

Could this be a way for excited and engaged doctors to provide enriched medical care to people and patients whom they care so much about?

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3 mins • 1 pt

What change should be made in the following sentence?
"What do I do first," I asked eagerly.

change comma to a question mark

delete the quotation marks after the comma

change eagerly to eager

make no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

What change should be made in the following sentence?
" Make sure you don't leave any lumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.

change comma after lumps to a period

change instructed to instructing

change stired to stirred

no change

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

CCSS.L.8.1C

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

What change should be made in the following sentence?
While I scraped my impatience off the griddle, Dad showed me what he meant by “solid bubbles” and then taught me how to flip the pancakes correct.

Change scraped to scrapped

Insert a comma after bubbles

change taught to teached

change correct to correctly

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

CCSS.L.2.1E

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

What change should be made in the following sentence?
I look forward to the recess bell like everyone else, but every time I go Outside, I think about how recess could be even better.

delete but

change Outside to outside

change better to more better

no change

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CCSS.L.3.1G

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

What change should be made in the following sentence?
Some of my friends play soccer or football on the field, but these unorganized games usually consist of one or two kids hogging the ball and everyone else just running around chassing them.

change play to plays

delete comma after field

change chassing to chasing

no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

Last month, my entire family went to watch the super bowl in Houston.

Delete the comma after "month"

Change "super bowl" to "Super Bowl"

Insert a comma after "super bowl"

Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

Lionel Messi, one of the world's best soccer players plays for FC Barcelona.

Insert a comma after "players"

Change "world's" to "worlds"

Insert a colon (:) after "Messi"

Make no change

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CCSS.L.9-10.2B

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What change should be made in the following sentence?"What do I do first," I asked eagerly.

What change should be made in the following sentence?" Make sure you don't leave any lumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.

What change should be made in the following sentence?While I scraped my impatience off the griddle, Dad showed me what he meant by “solid bubbles” and then taught me how to flip the pancakes correct.

What change should be made in the following sentence?I look forward to the recess bell like everyone else, but every time I go Outside, I think about how recess could be even better.

What change should be made in the following sentence?Some of my friends play soccer or football on the field, but these unorganized games usually consist of one or two kids hogging the ball and everyone else just running around chassing them.

Last month, my entire family went to watch the super bowl in Houston.

Lionel Messi, one of the world's best soccer players plays for FC Barcelona.

After finishing his homework at tutoring Marco went to the football game and enjoyed the rest of the night.

While I wanted to go to Johns house and play Xbox, I knew that I had to study for my test.

Michael wanted to eat pizza. Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.What is the best way to combine the sentences?

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What change should be made in the following sentence?
"What do I do first," I asked eagerly.

What change should be made in the following sentence?
" Make sure you don't leave any lumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.

What change should be made in the following sentence?
While I scraped my impatience off the griddle, Dad showed me what he meant by “solid bubbles” and then taught me how to flip the pancakes correct.

What change should be made in the following sentence?
I look forward to the recess bell like everyone else, but every time I go Outside, I think about how recess could be even better.

What change should be made in the following sentence?
Some of my friends play soccer or football on the field, but these unorganized games usually consist of one or two kids hogging the ball and everyone else just running around chassing them.

Michael wanted to eat pizza. Angelina wanted to eat cheeseburgers.
What is the best way to combine the sentences?