Everyday Editing

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

Do you own a Pluto Platter.

• Change you to your

• Change own to owns

• Change the period to a question mark.

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

If you have a Frisbee in you’re closet, you do!

• Change Frisbee to frisbee

• Change you're to your

• Delete the comma after closet

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

The original flying discs was actually pie tins from a bakery.

• Change discs to disc

• Change was to were

• Change bakery to bakeries

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

In 1948, Fred Morrison manufacture the first flying discs made of plastic.

• Change manufacture and manufactured

• Change made to make

• Change the period to a question mark

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

Then, in January 1957, a company called Wham-O introduced the Pluto Platter.

• Change Then to Than

• Delete the comma after 1957

• Change introduced to introduce

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

The Pluto Platter was later renamed the “Frisbee”

• Change was to were

• Change renamed to rename

• Add a period at the end of the sentence

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

It's estimated that more Frisbees are sold each

year than basketballs baseballs, and footballs combined!

• Change It's to Its

• Change than to then

• Add a comma after basketballs

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

Basketball has many fine players, but Michael Jordan is one of the best who has ever play the game.

• Delete the comma after players

• Change one to won

• Change has to have

• Change play to played

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

As a guard for the Chicago bulls, Michael led his

team to six championships.

• Change bulls to Bulls

• Delete the comma after bulls

• Change led to lead

• Make no change

What change, if any, needs to be made in the following sentence?

He also claimed gold medals two times as a member

of the U.S. olympic team.

• Change claimed to claim

• Change U.S. to US

• Change olympic to Olympic

• Make no change