Which revision improves clarity and conciseness?

The very hungry boy ate the cake.

The boy who was very hungry ate the cake.

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

capitalization, indentions, punctuation, and spelling.

It looks good enough so I'm done.

capitalization, animal crackers, starbursts, and peanuts

Many people believe that Nessie, the creature that lives beneath the Loch Ness in Scotland, is a monster. According to past stories. Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur! What is the correct way to write sentences 2 and 3?

According to past stories, Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur.

According to past stories, Nessie is related, to a type of aquatic dinosaur.

Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, according to past stories.

Related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, Nessie, according to past stories.

What do you type in this question?

Rewrite the sentence 28 and remove the repeated words

What is the correct way to combine sentences 1 and 2?

Everyone tells you not to act like a child, but that might be bad advice.

Everyone tells you not to act like a child, which that might be bad advice.

Everyone tells you, but not to act like a child because that might be bad advice.

Everyone tells you not to act. Like a child, that might be bad advice.

What change should be made to sentence 3?

Insert a comma after children's

Delete the comma after activities

What change should be made to sentence 7?

Insert commas after that and people

Insert commas after worrying and instead

Insert a semicolon after something

How should sentences 6 and 7 be written?

Another football team story claims that the players had to make their own uniforms, and they wound up looking like hippos.

Another story claims that the players, based on football, had to make their own uniforms that made them look like hippos.

Another story claims that the players had to make their own uniforms that made them look like hippos, also based on football.

This story is based on football and claims that the players had to make their own uniforms that made them look like hippos.

You can recycle your old crayons into chunky crayons. Remove the paper from the crayons. Break up the crayons then drop them into muffin tins. Pop them in the oven to melt. What is the best way to revise sentence 3?

Break up the crayons and drop them into muffin tins.

Break up the crayons. And drop them into muffin tins.

Disney World was opened in 1960 in Florida. It began with the Magic Kingdom and to add Epcot Center later. The Hollywood Studios attraction was also added. Which is the best way to revise Sentence 2?

It began with the Magic Kingdom, later to add Epcot Center.

It began with the Magic Kingdom. And to add Epcot Center was later.

It began with the Magic Kingdom and added Epcot Center later.

Which sentence is correct?

Jonny, who was walking home from school, was bitten by a dog.

Jonny who was walking home from school, was bitten by a dog.

Johnny who was walking home from school, was bitten by a dog.

Which revision improves clarity and conciseness?

The very hungry boy ate the cake.

The boy who was very hungry ate the cake.

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

capitalization, indentions, punctuation, and spelling.

It looks good enough so I'm done.

capitalization, animal crackers, starbursts, and peanuts

Many people believe that Nessie, the creature that lives beneath the Loch Ness in Scotland, is a monster. According to past stories. Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur! What is the correct way to write sentences 2 and 3?

According to past stories, Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur.

According to past stories, Nessie is related, to a type of aquatic dinosaur.

Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, according to past stories.

Related to a type of aquatic dinosaur, Nessie, according to past stories.

You can recycle your old crayons into chunky crayons. Remove the paper from the crayons. Break up the crayons then drop them into muffin tins. Pop them in the oven to melt. What is the best way to revise sentence 3?

Break up the crayons and drop them into muffin tins.

Break up the crayons. And drop them into muffin tins.

Disney World was opened in 1960 in Florida. It began with the Magic Kingdom and to add Epcot Center later. The Hollywood Studios attraction was also added. Which is the best way to revise Sentence 2?

It began with the Magic Kingdom, later to add Epcot Center.

It began with the Magic Kingdom. And to add Epcot Center was later.

It began with the Magic Kingdom and added Epcot Center later.

Which sentence is correct?

Jonny, who was walking home from school, was bitten by a dog.

Jonny who was walking home from school, was bitten by a dog.

Johnny who was walking home from school, was bitten by a dog.

Revise and Edit

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English

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7th Grade

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Practice Problem

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Hard

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CCSS

L.6.2A, RI.7.3, L.4.1F

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Standards-aligned

Sarah Williams

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26 questions

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MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

How should sentence 3 and 4 be written?

As this music, spread across Texas, later a subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas.

As this music spread across Texas, a subgenre of the blues appeared.

As this music spread; a subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas.

A subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas as music spread across Texas.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

How should sentences 7 and 8 be combined?

Johnson made it popular, so he inspired other performers.

Johnson made it popular, because he inspired other performers.

Johnson, made it popular, when he inspired other performers.

Johnson made it popular, and he inspired other performers.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

What change should be made to sentence 13?

Insert and before it

Insert but before it

Insert or before it

No change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

What change should be made to sentence 14?

Delete the comma after 1970s

Insert a comma after music

Insert a comma after again

Insert a comma after country

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

To make changes and corrections to a draft or other piece of writing is called _________.

planning

drafting

revising

editing

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

Choose the option that best revises the following sentence for clarity: "He delivered the performance, which was both powerful and moving, with great skill."

He skillfully delivered a powerful and moving performance.

The performance, which he delivered, was powerful, moving, and done with great skill.

Tags

DOK Level 2: Skill/Concept

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 2?

This could honestly go either way. There are so many good things and bad things that electronics can bring about.

This could honestly go either way, but there are so many good things and bad things.

There are so many good things; this could honestly go either way and an almost equal number of bad things.

No change needs to be made.

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How should sentence 3 and 4 be written?

How should sentences 7 and 8 be combined?

What change should be made to sentence 13?

What change should be made to sentence 14?

To make changes and corrections to a draft or other piece of writing is called _________.

Choose the option that best revises the following sentence for clarity: "He delivered the performance, which was both powerful and moving, with great skill."

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 2?

Which revision improves clarity and conciseness?

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

Many people believe that Nessie, the creature that lives beneath the Loch Ness in Scotland, is a monster. According to past stories. Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur!What is the correct way to write sentences 2 and 3?

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Many people believe that Nessie, the creature that lives beneath the Loch Ness in Scotland, is a monster. According to past stories. Nessie is related to a type of aquatic dinosaur!
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