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What change needs to be made to the underlined sentence in lines 15 through 17?

• change who to that

• change instead to insted

• delete the comma after environment

• change state to State

What change, if any, should be made to the underlined sentence in lines 26 and 27?

• change they to thems

• change perchase to purchase

• change are to is

• no change should be made

3. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• change father's to fathers

• change slipped to sliped

• change hisself to himself

• Make no change

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• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, he felt the raised letters were hard to read, though.

• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, but he felt the raised letters were hard to read.

• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, and he felt the raised letters were hard to read.

• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, then he felt the raised letters were hard to read.

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4. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

• change wanted to wanting

• change an to a

• change easier to more easy

• make no change

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

• change used to using

• change share to shair

• change informasion to information

• make no change

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus

• change everywhere to every  where

• change dessert to desert

• make no change

What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I

• change lots to lot's

• change there to their

• no change is needed

What is the correct way to write the sentence above?

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 

• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 

• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 

• No change is needed

What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change we've to we'll

• change quickly to quick

• insert quotation marks after quickly

• no change is needed