Editing and Mechanics

What makes this sentence wrong. " My friend's name is ben."

• Punctuation mark

• Capitalization of Proper Noun

What punctuation mark best fit the sentence? Where are you working _______

• !

• ?

• .

What punctuation mark best fit the sentence? Cheska is hiding herself at the back of the cabinet _____

• ?

• !

• .

What is the BEST way to combine these sentences?

Jack swung the bat. He missed the ball.

• Jack swung the bat, he missed the ball.

• Jack swung the bat, yet he missed the ball.

• Jack swung the bat he missed the ball.

• Jack swung the bat, for he missed the ball.

What is the BEST way to combine these sentences?

The chocolate icing is creamy. The vanilla icing is too stiff.

• The chocolate icing is creamy or the vanilla icing is too stiff.

• The chocolate icing is creamy, but the vanilla icing is too stiff.

• The chocolate icing is creamy, the vanilla icing is too stiff.

• The chocolate icing is creamy bu the vanilla icing is too stiff.

What is the BEST way to combine these sentences?

• The creepy monster growled loudly, took one step towards me, and stared at me with his beady red eyes.

• The creepy monster growled loudly and took one step towards me and stared at me with his beady red eyes.

• The creepy monster growled loudly, took one step towards me, stared at me with his beady red eyes.

• The creepy monster growled loudly, took one step towards me, or stared at me with his beady red eyes.

What is the most effective way to rewrite these sentences?

• Bella dropped her ice cream cone, nor it landed on her new shoes.

• Bella dropped her ice cream cone it landed on her new shoes.

• Bella dropped her ice cream cone, but it landed on her new shoes.

• Bella dropped her ice cream cone, and it landed on her new shoes.

What is the BEST way to combine these sentences?

Tomorrow may be sunny. Tomorrow may be partly cloudy.

• Tomorrow may be sunny, or tomorrow may be partly cloudy.

• Tomorrow may be sunny, or partly cloudy.

• Tomorrow may be sunny, and it may be partly cloudy.

• Tomorrow may be sunny or partly cloudy.

Which sentence is correct?

• Have you lost weight?  Your shirt looks very loose on you.

• Have you lost weight?  Your shirt looks very lose on you.

This sentence needs to be fixed. Choose the correct sentence. In the end the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb not eating her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb not eating her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb but not eat her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb and didn't eating her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb and didn't eat her.