Revising and Editing Pre-Assessment

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 10?

• change taked to took

• change sums to somes

• change the period after people to a question mark

• make no change

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 15?

• change asked to askt

• change fight to Fight

• insert a comma after French

• make no change

What is the best way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• Either tornadoes can be dangerous, or those living in Tornado Alley

  should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, but those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• After tornadoes can be dangerous, those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, so those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

Eve wants to add a topic sentence to the beginning of the paragraph containing sentences 11 through 13. Which would be the best topic sentence for this paragraph?

• Many times, tornadoes will form from a type of thunderstorm called a "supercell."

• So many tornadoes form in Tornado Alley because of the way

  large air masses typically move in this region.

• Some air masses in the United States are dry while other air masses are moist.

• The wind inside a tornado can reach speeds up to

  three hundred miles per hour.

The meaning of sentence 16 can be improved by changing they to which of the following?

• safe rooms

• people

• reports

• tornadoes

Eve wants to remove a sentence that does not belong in this selection. Which sentence should she remove?

• sentence 1

• sentence 6

• sentence 10

• sentence 14

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

• Change they're to their.

• Change father to Father

• Change they're to there

• Change helped to helping

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

• Change friends to friend's

• Insert a comma after After

• Insert a comma after shopping

• Insert a comma after store

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? 
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike. 

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

• The tire on the bicycle is flat.

Find the mistake in the sentence.  
The boy want to the park.  

• change boy to Boy

• change want to went 

• no change needs to be made