Revising and Editing Pre-Assessment

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 10?

• change taked to took

• change sums to somes

• change the period after people to a question mark

• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.K.1D

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 15?

• change asked to askt

• change fight to Fight

• insert a comma after French

• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the best way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• Either tornadoes can be dangerous, or those living in Tornado Alley

  should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, but those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• After tornadoes can be dangerous, those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

• Tornadoes can be dangerous, so those living in Tornado Alley should know what to do during bad weather.

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RL.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RL.3.2

Eve wants to add a topic sentence to the beginning of the paragraph containing sentences 11 through 13. Which would be the best topic sentence for this paragraph?

• Many times, tornadoes will form from a type of thunderstorm called a "supercell."

• So many tornadoes form in Tornado Alley because of the way

  large air masses typically move in this region.

• Some air masses in the United States are dry while other air masses are moist.

• The wind inside a tornado can reach speeds up to

  three hundred miles per hour.

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RL.4.2

CCSS.RL.3.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

The meaning of sentence 16 can be improved by changing they to which of the following?

• safe rooms

• people

• reports

• tornadoes

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

Eve wants to remove a sentence that does not belong in this selection. Which sentence should she remove?

• sentence 1

• sentence 6

• sentence 10

• sentence 14

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RL.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

• Change they're to their.

• Change father to Father

• Change they're to there

• Change helped to helping

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

• Change friends to friend's

• Insert a comma after After

• Insert a comma after shopping

• Insert a comma after store

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? 
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike. 

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

• The tire on the bicycle is flat.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Find the mistake in the sentence.  
The boy want to the park.  

• change boy to Boy

• change want to went 

• no change needs to be made

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C