Details

What are sensory details?

• Descriptions that appeal to our 5 senses

• Personal reflections or feelings

• Memories that we have had

• Real life experiences in writing

What are sensory details?

• Descriptions that appeal to our 5 senses

• Personal reflections or feelings

• Memories that we have had

• Real life experiences in writing

Which sentence is the best example of sensory details?

• I like chocolate.

• Chocolate is made from roasted, ground cacao seeds.

• Chocolate is delicious and I love to eat it.

• The chocolate melted on my tongue as I placed the heart shaped candy into my mouth.

Which sentence has stronger sensory details?

• I ate a big piece of cake.

• I ate a scrumptious piece of chocolate cake that was the size of a mountain and tasted like a dream.

Which sentence has stronger sensory details?

• Saturday was such a beautiful day.

• Saturday's weather was so delightfully warm with not a single cloud floating through the baby blue sky.

Which sentence has stronger sensory details?

• The room was decorated with paper streamers that looked like ocean waves when they rustled and cheerful balloons that smiled at the happy guests.

• The room looked really nice for the birthday party.

Which sentence has stronger sensory details?

• The smell floating from the garbage pail was an unpleasant combination of onions, banana peels, and old coffee.

• The garbage pailed smelled so bad.

Which sensory detail does this statement appeal to?

The sweet perfume of the flowers filled the room.

• sight

• touch

• taste

• smell

Which sentence has stronger sensory details?

• When I fell off my bike, I hurt my arm.

• After falling off my bike, my arm hurt so much that it felt like a hammer was pounding on my elbow.

What are sensory details?

• Descriptions that appeal to our 5 senses

• Personal reflections or feelings

• Memories that we have had

• Real life experiences in writing