Revision and Editing

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• Change the comma to a question mark

• Delete the quotation marks afte the comma

• Change eagerly to eager

• Make no change

What change should be made in sentence 13?

• Change the comma after lumps to a period

• Change instructed to instructing

• Change stired to stirred

• No change should be made to sentence 13

What is the correct way to write sentence 20?

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface. And have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface then we would have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.

• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

What change should be made in sentence 22?

• Change didn't to did'nt

• Insert a comma after pancake

• Change spreads out to spread out

• Sentence 22 should not be changed

Choose the option that best revises the following sentence for clarity: "He delivered the performance, which was both powerful and moving, with great skill."

• He skillfully delivered a powerful and moving performance.

• The performance, which he delivered, was powerful, moving, and done with great skill.

Tags

DOK Level 2: Skill/Concept

What DON'T you do when you edit?

• Add new ideas

• Fix the grammar

• Fix Spelling Mistakes

• Add punctuations

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 2?

• This could honestly go either way. There are so many good things and bad things that electronics can bring about.

• This could honestly go either way, but there are so many good things and bad things.

• There are so many good things; this could honestly go either way and an almost equal number of bad things.

• No change needs to be made.

What do you type in this question?

• RACE

• Write about what is repeated

• Rewrite the sentence 28 and remove the repeated words

• leave it as is

What is the correct way to write sentences 24 and 25?

• My father was very clear about this. How long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear. About how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear about this he told me how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear about how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

How should sentence 29 be changed?

• Change scraped to scrapped

• Insert a comma after bubbles

• Change taught to teached

• Change correct to correctly