What is the best change we can make to this sentence: When I opened my present I let out a yell.

Change I let out to and yell out

When Thomas missed him, he would sit in the woods, and the sound of the birds chirping was what he would listen to. What is the most effective revision to make?

When Thomas missed him, he would sit in the woods and listen to the sound of birds chirping.

Thomas would watch and listen to the sounds of birds chirping when he missed him in the woods.

When Thomas missed him, he would sit in the woods he would watch and listen to the sounds of birds chirping.

Thomas would watch, and he would listen to the sounds of birds chirping in the woods when he missed him.

He was learning how to solve equations. He found a trick that would make it easier. What is the most effective way to combine the 2 sentences?

While learning how to solve equations, he found a trick that would make it easier.

He was learning how to solve equations because he found a trick that would make it easier.

While learning how to solve equations, a trick that he figured out made it easier.

He was learning to solves the equations, then, he found a trick that would make it easier.

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 5 and 6?

Since the schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.

Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions, students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.

Drawing attending lines around subdivisions and student are attending school with those of similar economic backgrounds.

Schools’ attendance lines are drawn around subdivisions and students tend to attend school with other students of similar economic backgrounds.

Choose the correct sentence

While attempting to groom themselves, some penguins swallowed the toxic oil and died.

Some penguins would try to groom themselves because they swallowed the toxic oil and died.

Attempting to groom themselves were some penguins, who swallowed the toxic oil and died.

Some penguins would try to groom themselves, they swallowed the toxic oil and died.

Choose the correct sentence.

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. It was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke, and it was obvious. That she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke it was obvious that she was no happier about the arrangements than I was.

For the rest of the day, neither of us spoke. Which made it obvious that she was no happier about the arrangement than I was.

Which sentence is correctly punctuated?

A) The cat, which was very fluffy, sat on the mat.

B) The cat which was very fluffy sat on the mat.

C) The cat, which was very fluffy sat on the mat.

D) The cat which, was very fluffy, sat on the mat.

What is the best way to revise this sentence: 'The book was interesting it was full of suspense.'

C) The book was interesting because it was full of suspense.

A) The book was interesting, it was full of suspense.

B) The book was interesting; it was full of suspense.

D) The book was interesting it was, full of suspense.

Identify the sentence with the correct subject-verb agreement.

B) The team is winning the match.

A) The team are winning the match.

C) The team were winning the match.

D) The team has winning the match.

What is the most effective way to combine these sentences: 'He loves to read. He reads every night before bed.'

C) He loves to read and reads every night before bed.

A) He loves to read, he reads every night before bed.

B) He loves to read; he reads every night before bed.

D) He loves to read because he reads every night before bed.

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MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

His name was given to him by his grandmother, which means “brave one” in another language.

What is the most effective revision to make?

His name, which means “brave one” in another language, was given to him by his grandmother.

Since his name was given to him by his grandmother, it means “brave one” in another language.

His name was given to him by his grandmother, it means “brave one” in another language.

Given to him by a grandmother, in another language, his name means “brave one.”

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do.

Since, I was absent on Tuesday I have a lot of make-up work to do.

Since I was absent, on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do.

Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot, of make-up work to do.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

Choose the sentence that is written correctly.

We went to their house because there hosting a party.

They're having a party at there house this weekend.

We went to their house because they're hosting a party.

There having a party at their house this weekend.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

change family to Family

change I to me

change river to River

The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

Which answer shows the correct way to write the sentence?

Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the the surface. And have a big mess to clean up.

Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface then we would have a big mess to clean up.

Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.

Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up then.

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CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

He was practicing his soccer skills because he found a stray dog.

He was practicing his soccer skills, there, he found a stray dog.

He was practicing his soccer skills; and then found a stray dog.

He was practicing his soccer skills when he found a stray dog.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

1 min • 1 pt

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.

Change few to fewer

Change breif to brief

Change the , to a ;

No change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1G

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Editing and Revising Sentence Practice

His name was given to him by his grandmother, which means “brave one” in another language.

What is the most effective revision to make?

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

Choose the sentence that is written correctly.

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

Which answer shows the correct way to write the sentence?

Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

When I opened my present I let out a yell.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

"It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

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Editing and Revising Sentence Practice

His name was given to him by his grandmother, which means “brave one” in another language. What is the most effective revision to make?

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

Choose the sentence that is written correctly.

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

Which answer shows the correct way to write the sentence?

Which of these is the correct way to join two sentences:

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: When I opened my present I let out a yell.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: "It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

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His name was given to him by his grandmother, which means “brave one” in another language.

What is the most effective revision to make?

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

When I opened my present I let out a yell.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

"It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.