Revision and Editing

How does this sentence need to be changed?
Preston and his friend's cleaned their bikes so they could enter the contest. 

• Change friend's to friends

• Change bikes to bike's

• Change their to they're

• This sentence does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

I don't know if your going to like the gift I brought you. 

• Change your to you're

• Change know to no

• Change brought to brang

• No change should be made. 

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CCSS.L.4.1C

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

When the bunnies realized what was going on, they ran to there grandma's house.

• Change grandma's to Grandma's

• Change bunnies to bunnys

• Change there to their 

• No change should be made. 

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

I was sad to go home from the Christmas party. As we drove up to our house, though, I am excited to see that my dad put up our Christmas lights and wreaths!
What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2?

• As we drove up to our house, though, I was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths. 

• As we drove up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

• As we drove up to our house, though, I be excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

• As we drive up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

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CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus

• change everywhere to every  where

• change dessert to desert

• make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• add a comma before and 

• change helpfull to helpful

• insert a comma after difficult

• no change is needed

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Make sure you don't leave any lumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.
What change should be made in sentence 13? 

• Change the comma after lumps to a period

• Change instructed to instrcuting

• Change stired to stirred

• No change should be made

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

CCSS.L.8.1C

Which answer shows the correct way to write the sentence?

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the the surface. And have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface then we would have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up then.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

__ a fine bunch of pups.

• They're

• Their

• There

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CCSS.L.3.1A

Which sentence is correctly revised for clarity? 'The cat chased the mouse, it was fast.'

• The cat chased the mouse, and it was fast.

• The cat chased the mouse. It was fast.

• The cat chased the mouse; it was fast.

• The cat chased the mouse because it was fast.