Revision and Editing

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? 
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike. 

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

• The tire on the bicycle is flat.

Which of the following sentences is correctly punctuated?

• In the middle of night. The van pulled up.

• Chuck would not, give Jane the seat.

• Over coffee and toast, Kelly told me about her new job.

• Lemonade. My favorite drink.

Choose the sentence that is written correctly.

• We went to their house because there hosting a party.

• They're having a party at there house this weekend.

• We went to their house because they're hosting a party.

• There having a party at their house this weekend.

Which sentence is correct?

• Their chasing their dog into their house.

• They're chasing their dog into their house.

• They're chasing their dog into they're house.

• Their chasing their dog into they're house.

to alter something already written or printed, in order to make corrections, improve, or update is known as ​ (a)  

• revising

• editing

• characterization

• symbolism

• protagonist

• antagonist

• ominous

• irony

• conflict

• genre

means to revise or correct a written work

• edit

• revise

• characterization

• genre

• tone

• mood

• protagonist

• antagonist

• conflict

• resolution

What change should be made in the following sentence?

Friendships form as you rehearse together and push each other to do you're best.

(a)  

• change you're to your

• change Friendships to Freindships

• change as to until

• change rehearse to will rehearse

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

• It looks good enough so I'm done.

• capitalization, animal crackers, starbursts, and peanuts

• I don't want to.

• capitalization, indentions, punctuation, and spelling.

What do you type in this question?

• RACE

• Write about what is repeated

• Rewrite the sentence 28 and remove the repeated words

• leave it as is

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

"It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."

• Change It's to Its

• Change to to too

• Change he to He

• Change because to Because