Revising and Editing Type in the Box

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? One day, Tom n., my classmate brought a drone to school.

• Change Tom n. to Tom N.

• Change brought to brung

• Change a to an

• No change needs to be made

Answer explanation

Proper nouns should be capitalized. First names and last names begin with a capital letter.

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? The house was made out of brick and I wondered how brick could twist like that.

• Change made to maid

• Insert a comma after brick

• Insert a comma after and

• No change needs to be made in sentence 10

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? With our parent's assistence, each student was allowed to throw the flaming ball.

• Change parent's to parents

• Change assistence to assistance

• Change was to were

• No change needs to be made

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? My collection of football cards are made up of different players and teams.

• Change cards to card's

• Insert a comma after boomerangs

• Change are to is

• No change needs to be made

Answer explanation

The subject of this sentence is "collection". The word "collection" is a singular noun and needs to have a singular noun which is the word "is" and not "are".

What DON'T you do when you edit?

• Add new ideas

• Fix the grammar

• Fix Spelling Mistakes

• Add punctuations

What do you type in this question?

• RACE

• Write about what is repeated

• Rewrite the sentence 28 and remove the repeated words

• leave it as is

What change, if any, should be made in sentence sentence 3?

• Change swiming to swimming

• Change during to durring

• Add a comma after during

• No change is needed

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• Change activities to activitys

• Change colaborate to collaborate

• Change has to have

• no change is needed

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

• It looks good enough so I'm done.

• capitalization, animal crackers, starbursts, and peanuts

• I don't want to.

• capitalization, indentions, punctuation, and spelling.

When you revise, what DON'T you do?

• Add new thoughts

• Add more details

• Choose more descriptive words

• Fix grammar errors