Revise and Edit

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

• Change friends to friend's

• Insert a comma after After

• Insert a comma after shopping

• Insert a comma after store

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• Change the period to a question mark.

• Change had to has

• Change to to too

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.4.3B

CCSS.L.K.2B

The monkey’s swung through the trees. (15) One of them fell on the ground.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

• Change monkey’s to monkeys

• Change swung to swinged

• Add a comma after swung

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

While David folded laundry, his brother does the dishes. They went outside to play. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

• Change David to david

• Delete the comma after laundry

• Change does to did

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

Choose the option that best revises the following sentence for clarity: "He delivered the performance, which was both powerful and moving, with great skill."

• He skillfully delivered a powerful and moving performance.

• The performance, which he delivered, was powerful, moving, and done with great skill.

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DOK Level 2: Skill/Concept

Which revision improves clarity and conciseness?

• The boy who was very hungry ate the cake.

• The very hungry boy ate the cake.

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DOK Level 2: Skill/Concept

When you have finished your rough draft, what 4 things should you make sure to check?

• It looks good enough so I'm done.

• capitalization, animal crackers, starbursts, and peanuts

• I don't want to.

• capitalization, indentions, punctuation, and spelling.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What DON'T you do when you edit?

• Add new ideas

• Fix the grammar

• Fix Spelling Mistakes

• Add punctuations

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CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

What is the best way to revise this sentence for clarity: 'The cat, which was very fluffy, sat on the mat.'

• A) The fluffy cat sat on the mat.

• B) The cat sat on the mat, which was fluffy.

• C) The mat was sat on by the fluffy cat.

• D) The cat, fluffy, sat on the mat.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

Which sentence is correctly punctuated?

• A) I went to the store, and bought milk.

• B) I went to the store and bought milk.

• C) I went, to the store and bought milk.

• D) I went to the store and, bought milk.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B