Revise and Edit Words

They found Emma and her cute dog at the schools park.

• Change Emma to emma

• change schools park to school's park

• change Dog to dog

• no change needed

Last month, my entire family went to watch the super bowl in Houston.

• Delete the comma after "month"

• Change "super bowl" to "Super Bowl"

• Insert a comma after "super bowl"

• Make no change

When we fixed the broken-down car, it worked surprisingly well.

• Delete the comma after "car"

• Change "surprisingly" to "surprising"

• Change "broken-down" to "broken down"

• Make no change

The robertsons knew more better then to lose all hope of being rescued

• Revise

• Edit

• Revise and Edit

• Make no changes

harris is the bestest school in the hole district

• Edit only

• Spelling error

• Revise and edit

• Revise only

Bradyn, new better than to go to the water fountain without signing out.

• Revise

• Edit

• Cups

• Plates

How should sentence 3 and 4 be written?

• As this music, spread across Texas, later a subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas.

• As this music spread across Texas, a subgenre of the blues appeared.

• As this music spread; a subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas.

• A subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas as music spread across Texas.

How should sentences 7 and 8 be combined?

• Johnson made it popular, so he inspired other performers.

• Johnson made it popular, because he inspired other performers.

• Johnson, made it popular, when he inspired other performers.

• Johnson made it popular, and he inspired other performers.

What is the correct way to combine sentences 1 and 2?

• Everyone tells you not to act like a child, which that might be bad advice.

• Everyone tells you not to act like a child, but that might be bad advice.

• Everyone tells you, but not to act like a child because that might be bad advice.

• Everyone tells you not to act. Like a child, that might be bad advice.

What change should be made to sentence 3?

• Insert a comma after children's

• Insert a comma after nap

• Insert a comma after coloring

• Delete the comma after activities