Revise and Edit Words

Damian would like to use a more appropriate transition in sentence 14. Which of the following is the best replacement for Therefore?

• However

• For example

• Furthermore

• Meanwhile

What is the correct way to write the sentence above?

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 

• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 

• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 

• No change is needed

This famous statue was a gift to the United States. (5) France gave the State of Liberty to the United States. (6) Since 1886, it has proudly stood in New York Harbor to welcome people to America.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences?

• Combine the sentences using a conjunction.

• Rewrite the sentences into a single complex sentence.

• Use a semicolon to connect the sentences.

• Create a summary of the sentences.

Mom and dad agreed to watch me an return me to the first aid station if I started to be have strangely.

• Change dad to Dad

• Insert a comma after watch me

• Change strangely to strange

• D. Make no Change

My parents and I was a little nervous about me getting back into the water, especially to go on any fast-moving rides.

• Change parents to Parents

• Change was to were

• Delete the comma after water

• Sentence is correct

Last month, my entire family went to watch the super bowl in Houston.

• Delete the comma after "month"

• Change "super bowl" to "Super Bowl"

• Insert a comma after "super bowl"

• Make no change

It’s important that I listen too my teacher, so I can pass the test.

How should the sentence be changed?

• Change It’s to Its

• Change too to to

• Remove the comma after teacher

• Change teacher to Teacher

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change Its to It’s

• Change plenty to plentie

• Change their to there

• Change students to student’s

What change, if any, should be made in the sentence?

• Change your to you’re

• Insert a comma after early

• Change recieve to receive

• No change should be made.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change then to than

• Change nourishment to norishment

• Change discovered to discover

• No change needs to be made in the sentence