STAAR Revisions and Editing Response

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 5?

• Change like to likes

• Change we to they

• Change created to creating

• No change needs to be made.

What change should be made in sentence 8?

• Change rain forests to rain forest’s

• Change thickly to thick

• Delete the comma after areas

• Insert a comma after shore

What change should be made in sentence 13?

• Change need to needs

• Change walks to walk

• Change use to using

• No change is needed.

What change should be made to sentence 18? In Sweden their is a tree house hotel that is shaped like a bird’s nest.

• Change their to there

• Insert a comma after hotel

• Change shaped to shape

• Change bird’s to birds

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 26?

• Change makes to make

• Change greatest to great

• Insert a comma after spot

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

What change is needed in sentence 28?

• Change prefer to prefers

• Change climb to climbing

• Change traditionul to traditional

• No change needs to be made.

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 4?

• Change find to found

• Change entertain to entertaining

• Change themselfs to themselves

• No change should be made in sentence 4.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• Change are to were

• Delete the comma after mammals

• Change that to they

• No change should be made in sentence 6.

What is the correct way to write sentence 10?

• One kind of an air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring. Happening to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, and called a bubble ring. Then it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle. It is called a bubble ring, and it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

How should sentence 11 be changed?

• Change Scientists to scientists

• Insert a comma after filmed

• Change playing to play

• Change rings to ring