Revision and Editing Lesson

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 13?

• Change Grinning to Grining

• Change brought to brung

• Change are to our

• No change should be made in sentence 13.

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 19?

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.

• My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals, she warned me.

• My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

• Delete the comma

• Change grabed to grabbed

• Change that to it

• No change should be made.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 24?

• Delete the comma after Mom

• Change me to I

• Change looked to looking

• Sentence 24 should not be changed.

How should sentence 28 be changed?

• Change your to you’re

• Change attention to atention

• Change ingredients to ingredient’s

• Sentence 28 should not be changed.

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 30?

• Change This to Which

• Change save to safe

• Change later to latter

• No change needs to be made in sentence 30.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 33?

• Insert a comma after planned

• Delete but

• Change she knew to they knew

• No change should be made in sentence 33.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• A) Change their to there

• B) Change its to it's

• C) Change were to where

• D) No change should be made in sentence 5.

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 12?

• A) The cat, which was black, sat on the mat.

• B) The cat sat on the mat, which was black.

• C) The black cat sat on the mat.

• D) The cat sat on the black mat.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

• A) Change affect to effect

• B) Change there to their

• C) Change it's to its

• D) No change should be made in sentence 7.