Revise Questions

As she walked along the sand, Mary's bucket filled with different varietys of seashells; her heart also reflected on the memories she had collected during her trip to the seashore. Editing: Use the text above to answer the following question. What change should be made in sentence 1?

• Delete the comma after sand

• Change varietys to varieties

• Change the semicolon after seashells to a comma

• Change during to durring

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

Many people keep small backyard flocks because chickens have been raised by humans for hundreds of years. Revising: Use the text above to answer the following question. What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 1?

• Chickens have been raised by humans for hundreds of years, and many people still keep small backyard flocks.

• Chickens have been raised by humans for hundreds of years, which means many people still keep small backyard flocks.

• For hundreds of years, people have raised chickens, many people still keep small backyard flocks.

• Chickens have been raised by humans for hundreds of years, there are still many people keeping small backyard flocks.

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

(1) Rather then sitting home and feeling sorry for myself, I decided to heal my wounds by going and visiting Granny. (2) Her advice always makes me feel better. Editing: Use the text above to answer the following question. How should sentence 1 be changed?

• Change then to than

• Change heal to heel

• Change Granny to granny

• Sentence 1 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence? 
Leah like to play outside and catch butterflies. 

• Change butterflies to butterflys

• Change like to likes

• Add a comma after and

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

In the context of writing, what does revising involve?

• Changing the topic of your essay.

• Correcting only the spelling mistakes.

• Re-evaluating the organization, content, and flow.

• Printing the final draft.

Revise the following sentence to improve its flow. "John went to the store. He bought milk."

• John went to the store to buy milk.

• John, going to the store, bought milk.

• To the store, John went and bought milk.

• Milk was bought by John, who went to the store.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Revise the following sentence to improve its clarity. "The cat, which was black and white, jumped on the table, which was old and dusty."

• The black and white cat jumped on the old and dusty table.

• The table, which was old and dusty, was jumped on by the cat, which was black and white.

• On the old and dusty table, the cat, which was black and white, jumped.

• The cat, black and white, on the table, old and dusty, jumped.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which revision improves clarity and conciseness?

• The boy who was very hungry ate the cake.

• The very hungry boy ate the cake.

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DOK Level 2: Skill/Concept

Revise the following sentence to make it clearer. "She saw a bird when she was walking her dog in the park."

• Walking her dog in the park, she saw a bird.

• She was walking her dog in the park when she saw a bird.

• In the park, she saw a bird walking her dog.

• She saw a bird and was walking her dog in the park.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

What is the best way to revise sentence 10?

• JJ Watt believes if you work hard, you can make your dreams come true.

• JJ Watt believes in hard work and dreams come true.

• JJ Watt believes dreams and hard work.

• The sentence does not need to be revised.

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CCSS.L.3.1A