Revise Questions

My little sister stared up at me in complete shock and starts to cry. All I could see was broke glass and a tangle of wires on the floor. What had I done? My mom's antique lamp was now in a million pieces on the living room floor. My Grandmother had been given the lamp as a gift during World War II when she was serving as a nurse. Editing: Use the text above to answer the following question. What change should be made to sentence 1?

• Changed looked to looks

• Change starts to started

• Change cry to cries

• No change should be made

It is not the aim to set up a new organization to parallel in it's purposes others already established. Editing: Use the passage above to answer the following questions. What change should be made to sentence 2?

• Add a comma after organization

• Change it's to its

• Change others to other's

• Make no change

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 26?

• Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model and add it to any state on the map.

• Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model to any state on the map they could add what they built.

• Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model, then they were able to add that LEGO model to any state on the map.

• Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model, then visitors could add the LEGO brick model to any state on the map.

What is the correct way to write sentence 6?

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. And looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country and looks pink that is because it is made form sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country, and it looks pink. Because it is made from sunset-red granite.

• This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. It looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite.

Correct the following sentence:

My favorite book is by dr Seuss.

• Change book to booke

• Change Seuss to seuss

• Change dr to Dr.

• Make no change

Choose the best answer

• She is listening to English songs.

• She listen to English songs.

• She are listening to English songs.

• She does listen to music.

Choose the best answer.

• Amy always revises before an exam.

• Amy revise before an exam.

• Amy revising before an exam.

• Amy is revised before an exam.

Zack ..................... when he doesn't understand.

• asking questions

• ask questions

• asks questions

• am asking questions

Jamal and his friends usually ......................... on their pronunciation.

• practised

• practise

• practising

• is practising

Hannah __________English exercises twice a week.

• am writing

• write

• is writing

• writes