Revision Adding Sentences

Match the sentences

7- ____

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Match the sentences

8- ____

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CCSS.L.4.1F

To show an addition (more information), use a transition like:

• obviously, clearly, evidently

• as a result, because, since, so

• besides, for example, furthermore

• but, yet, although, though

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

The following sentence pair can be revised into one better sentence.Choose the sentence that is the best revision.

The clown is funny.The clown is in the car.

• The clown is in the car,and the clown is funny.

• The clown is funny and is in the car.

• In the car,the clown there is funny.

• The clown in the car is funny.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Sierra would like to add a sentence to bring her story to a more effective close. Which
sentence could she add after this sentence: 
He pawed one hoof, bobbed his head, and stood tall, fit, and proud.

• As the son of Zeus and Diamond, Dudley was proud of his heritage.

• The plain little colt had finally become the horse he had been bred to be.

• He was ready to move back to the McGee ranch and be with his family again.

• Dudley would never be the horse that people had hoped for, but he was still special.

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CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RI.7.10

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.6.10

CCSS.RL.7.10

Adding and cutting details; making sure your writing is clear and achieves its purpose.

• Revising

• Editing

• Prewriting

• Drafting

You cut, add, change, and rearrange details during...

• Editing

• Publishing

• Revision

• Prewriting

Which is the 3rd step in the writing process?

• Drafting

• Revising

• Editing

• Publishing

To show an addition (more information), use a transition like:

• A) obviously, clearly, evidently

• B) as a result, because, since, so

• C) besides, for example, furthermore

• D) but, yet, although, though

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

The following sentence pair can be revised into one better sentence. Choose the sentence that is the best revision. The clown is funny. The clown is in the car.

• A) The clown is in the car, and the clown is funny.

• B) The clown is funny and is in the car.

• C) In the car, the clown there is funny.

• D) The clown in the car is funny.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C