Revise and Edit English II

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I

• change lots to lot's

• change there to their

• no change is needed

What is the correct way to write the sentence above?

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 

• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 

• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 

• No change is needed

We've got to go quickly, said his mother.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change we've to we'll

• change quickly to quick

• insert quotation marks after quickly

• no change is needed

The students visited Angelo State University and toured the observatory. They had a wonderful time! I want to add more detail after sentence 1. Which sentence could BEST follow sentence 1?

• The students went on a field trip.

• All of the kids got to ride on the school bus to the university. 

• An observatory is a place where you can look at stars through a telescope. 

• The telescope was huge!

Which of the following is NOT a complete sentence?

• Timothy turned his homework in late.

• He ran quickly.

• However, she was.

• The bird perched on the power line. 

The lite from the morning sunrise was absolutely beautiful. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change sunrise to sun  rise 

• change beautiful to beautifull

• change lite to light 

• no change is needed

the little girl was quite excited to go shopping at the mall with her grandmother. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change the to The

• change quite to quiet

• change grandmother to Grandmother

• no change is needed

You can recycle your old crayons into chunky crayons. Remove the paper from the crayons. Break up the crayons then drop them into muffin tins. Pop them in the oven to melt. What is the best way to revise sentence 3?

• Break up the crayons and drop them into muffin tins.

• Break up the crayons. And drop them into muffin tins.

• Break up the crayons

We should try to keep our parks clean and free of trash. This shows that we want to take care of our natural resources. To remind people, we post rules about how to take care of our parks. Which sentence could best follow sentence 3?

•  Knowing the rules will help people keep our parks clean. 

• Going to the parks on weekends can be fun for everyone. 

• Many people use the parks every weekend. 

The Titanic was the largest and most elegant passenger ship in 1912. It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean. It sank within three hours. What is the best way to combine sentences 2 and 3?

•  It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean, it sank within three hours.

•  It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean. it sank within three hours

• It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean and sank within three hours.