Revise and Edit Questions

Revise this: The forest was very beautiful.

• The forest was enchanting.

• The forest made me very happy.

• Redwoods stretched from the dense, green foliage into the blue sky.

• The forest was big and majestic. There were trees everywhere.

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.1.1F

He later explained that he just wasn’t confident he would be able to land the kayak safe.

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 27?

• Change explained to explains

• Change confident to confidant

• Change safe to safely

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Dan and his wife Lisa have invented a new way of celebrating thanksgiving.

• Change Dan to dan

• Change invented to inventing

• Change celebrating to celabrating

• Change thanksgiving to Thanksgiving.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Memorial Day officially began in May 1868, when we honored Civil War soldiers at Arlington National Cemetary by putting flowers on there graves.

• Change graves to grave

• Change there to they're

• Change there to their

• Change putting to put

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

Looking for her dog, the shelter is where she went. What is the most effective revision to make in the sentence?

• A. Looking for her dog, the young girl went into the shelter.

• B. She looked for her dog, she went into the shelter.

• C. Looking for her dog was when she went into the shelter.

• D. No revision needed in the sentence.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

“Take care of him” said Pete’s owner. What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• A. Insert a comma after him

• B. Change Pete’s to Petes’

• C. Insert quotation marks after the period

• D. No change needs to be made in this sentence

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the best way to combine the sentences?

• She was one of the most famous activists of all time, she started three movements

• She was one of the most famous activists of all time; however, she started three movements.

• Anna Marie, one of the most famous activists of all time, started three movements.

• Although Anna Marie was one of the most famous activists of all time, she started three movements.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What is the best way to revise the sentences?

• When the breaks stopped working, Thomas lost control.

• Thomas was losing control, and the breaks stopped working.

• The breaks stopped working and this is when Thomas was losing control.

• The breaks stopped working, but Thomas lost control.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the MOST effective way to combine these two sentences?

• Playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise, so not every kid wants to join a team.

• Playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise, but not every kid wants to join a team.

• Not every kid wants to join a team, also playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise.

• Because playing a team sport is one way to get this exercise, not every kid wants to join a team.

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CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

It is not the aim to set up a new organization to parallel in it's purposes others already established. Editing: Use the passage above to answer the following questions. What change should be made to sentence 2?

• Add a comma after organization

• Change it's to its

• Change others to other's

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A