STAAR Revising/Editing

In September of 1921, Coleman, whom was now a proficient pilot, came back to the United States. What change should Gena make in sentence 17?

• Insert a comma after September

• Change whom to who

• Change proficient to proficiant

• Change came to comes

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 25?

• Insert a comma after performance

• Change the comma after 1926 to a semicolon

• Change mechanical to machanical

• No change should be made

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

How does sentence 28 need to be changed?

• Change Similar to Similarly

• Change female to females

• Change started to would start

• Insert a comma after Club

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• But online networking, which is very popular with teens today, promotes short, superficial connections.

• But online networking promotes short, superficial connections, it is very popular with teens today.

• But online networking that promotes short, superficial connections, it is very popular with teens today.

• But online networking promotes short, superficial connections with teens today, which it is very popular.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

Everyone communicates in person differently than communicating over the phone, through texting, or in online posts. What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 16?

• Everyone communicates in person in one way, they communicate in different ways over the phone, through texting, or in online posts.

• Everyone communicates differently in person than they do when speaking over the phone, sending texts, or writing online posts.

• Everyone communicates in person differently than they do over the phone, to send texts, or posting online.

• Everyone communicates in person, over the phone, through texting, or in online posts differently.

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

To enhance their surroundings, fake windows with decorative drapes are installed by some people. How should sentence 20 be revised?

• To enhance their surroundings, installing fake windows and decorative drapes helped some people.

• To enhance their surroundings, some people install fake windows and they also use decorative drapes.

• To enhance their surroundings, fake windows with decorative drapes are installed by some people to help them.

• To enhance their surroundings, some people install fake windows with decorative drapes.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

How should sentence 5 be changed?

• Change explore to explored

• Change were written to was written

• Change years to year’s

• Change you to they

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

Being able to hear those voices from the past is a privilage young people should be grateful to have.

What change should be made in sentence 9?

• Insert a comma after past

• Change is to are

• Change privilage to privilege

• Change grateful to gratefull

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

According to Philip Davis one of the English professors involved in the study, “Serious literature acts like a rocket-booster to the brain.” How should sentence 23 be changed?

• Change According to Acording

• Insert a comma after Davis

• Change Serious to serious

• Sentence 23 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

With no instructions or guidence, Ortiz and his sister planned to take their new boats out onto the water. What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change With to Without

• Change guidence to guidance

• Delete the comma

• Change planned to planning

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CCSS.L.2.2C