Revise Writing

It’s important that I listen too my teacher, so I can pass the test.

How should the sentence be changed?

• Change It’s to Its

• Change too to to

• Remove the comma after teacher

• Change teacher to Teacher

I watched the movie before I read the book and it ruined the book for me.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Insert a comma before and

• Change watched to watch

• Change ruined to runed

• Insert a comma after movie

These animals have learned to live among the grasses and flowers of the wide open prairie. The meaning of the sentence is unclear. What could the writer change to improve the clarity of the sentence?

• Change These animals to Coyote, deer, and bison

• Change live to survive

• Change wide to large

• Change among to around

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change summer to Summer

• Change kids to kids’

• Change our to their

• The sentence should not be changed.

Which sentence uses descriptive language effectively?

• The dog ran.

• The big, fluffy dog sprinted across the grassy field.

• The dog was fast.

• The dog moved.

Choose the best revision for clarity: "The boy quickly ran to the store because he needed to buy milk."

• The boy ran to the store quickly because he needed milk.

• The boy needed to buy milk, so he ran quickly to the store.

• The boy ran to the store because he needed to buy milk quickly.

• The boy quickly needed to buy milk, so he ran to the store.

What is the best way to organize the following ideas logically in a paragraph about making a sandwich? Spread peanut butter on one slice of bread. Place the slices together. Get two slices of bread. Spread jelly on the other slice.

• 3, 1, 4, 2

• 1, 3, 2, 4

• 4, 3, 1, 2

• 2, 1, 4, 3

Which sentence could use more supporting details?

• The library was quiet and filled with the scent of old books.

• The concert was loud.

• The garden was blooming with roses, daisies, and sunflowers.

• The classroom was decorated with colorful posters and student artwork.

Which sentence is correctly punctuated?

• A) I need to buy eggs milk and bread.

• B) I need to buy eggs, milk, and bread.

• C) I need to buy, eggs, milk and bread.

• D) I need to buy eggs milk, and bread.

Choose the sentence that uses the correct form of the verb.

• A) She go to the store every Saturday.

• B) She goes to the store every Saturday.

• C) She going to the store every Saturday.

• D) She gone to the store every Saturday.