Practice, Revise, and Edit Review

How should sentence 19 be changed?

• Change know to no

• Change it’s to its

• Change mom to Mom

• No change needs to be made.

What change needs to be made in sentence 22?

• Change followed to follows

• Change mothers to mother’s

• Change slowly to slow

• Change mixed to mixt

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 28?

• Change though to tho

• Change the comma after surprised to a semicolon

• Change feel to fill

• Sentence 28 does not need to be changed.

Which sentence could be added after sentence 2 to strengthen the introduction to this story?

• I think the door needs painting.

• I am half as old as my brother.

• In the meantime, our car needs a car wash and some gas.

• At this rate, it will be August before you ever get out the door.

Nina would like to add the following sentence to the eighth paragraph (sentences 21-25). "They got right to work." Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• After sentence 21

• After sentence 22

• After sentence 23

• After sentence 24

(1) You can recycle your old crayons into chunky crayons. (2) Remove the paper from the crayons. (3) Break up the crayons then drop them into muffin tins. (4) Pop them in the oven to melt. What is the best way to revise sentence 3? 

• A. Break up the crayons and drop them into muffin tins.

• B. Break up the crayons. And drop them into muffin tins.

•  C. Break up the crayons

What correction can be made to the following sentence?

• Changed played to play

• Change Kaitlyn to kaitlyn

• Add a period after treehouse

• Change the to a

What does it mean to REVISE your writing? Pick 2

• Fix spelling errors

• Fix capitalization errors

• Add or remove words and sentences

• Move words or substitute synonyms for words

What does it mean to EDIT your writing? Pick 2

• Fix spelling errors

• Fix capitalization errors

• Add or remove words and sentences

• Move words or substitute synonyms for words

April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night. With their dad. april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

Which change needs to be made to this passage.

• change neice to niece

• change nephew to nefew

• change trains to tranes

• No change