Revising or Editing

• Revising
• Editing

• Revising
• Editing

• Revising
• Editing

• Revising
• Editing

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 2?

• This could honestly go either way. There are so many good things and bad things that electronics can bring about.

• This could honestly go either way, but there are so many good things and bad things.

• There are so many good things; this could honestly go either way and an almost equal number of bad things.

• No change needs to be made.

What do you type in this question?

• RACE

• Write about what is repeated

• Rewrite the sentence 28 and remove the repeated words

• leave it as is

What DON'T you do when you edit?

• Add new ideas

• Fix the grammar

• Fix Spelling Mistakes

• Add punctuations

Which sentence is correct?

• But in 2005, Stevens found a way to make her work even more meaningful when she was asked to help a group of disabled veterans train their dogs to be service dogs.

• But in 2005, Stevens found a way to make her work even more meaningful, she was asked to help a group of disabled veterans train their dogs to be service dogs.

Which sentence is correct?

• This can not only affect a student’s ability to concentrate in class and at work but decreased enthusiasm for other aspects of everyday life including spending time with friends and family.

• This can not only affect a student’s ability to concentrate in class and work but also decrease enthusiasm for other aspects of everyday life, including spending time with friends and family.

Which sentence is written correctly?

• Custer, Meiler, Bates, and other active seniors show us that life can have vibrancy, excitement, and is adventurous, no matter how old you are.

• Custer, Meiler, Bates, and other active seniors show us that life can have vibrancy, excitement, and adventure, no matter how old you are.