Edit and Revision

At night the member’s of a family gather in a warm, cozy huddle to sleep

• Change member’s to members

• Change gather to gathering

• Change cozy to cozey

• Sentence 21 should not be changed.

Many familys spend their holidays traveling.

How should sentence 1 be changed?

• Change familys to families

• Change their to there

• change holidays to holidaies

• no change is needed

And no trip to the museum would be complete without a visit to the Texas spirit theater.

• Change no trip to know trip

• Change complete to completely

• Change without a visit to without no visit

• Change Texas spirit theater to Texas Spirit Theater

More then a million bats will come out from their home under the bridge and fill the sky.

• Change then to than

• Change will come to have come

• Insert a comma after bridge

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

these mountains served as a home for a type of deer called mule deer.

What change if any needs to be made to sentence 5?

• Change served to serve

• Change called to they are called

• Change the period to a comma

• No change is needed in sentence 5.

What is the correct way to write sentences 11 and 12? Think What sounds the BEST?

• With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers. In the tropical forest.

• With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers in the tropical forest.

• With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers these are in the tropical forest.

How should this sentence be changed?

• change others to other's

• delete the word more

• change closer to closser

• no change needed

Which sentence is correctly revised?

• A) The book was read by me yesterday.

• B) Yesterday, I read the book.

• C) The book, I read it yesterday.

• D) Yesterday was when I read the book.

What is the best way to revise this sentence: 'The cat quickly ran across the street.'?

• A) The cat ran across the street quickly.

• B) Quickly, the cat ran across the street.

• C) Across the street, the cat quickly ran.

• D) The cat ran quickly across the street.

Identify the error in this sentence: 'She enjoys to read books and watching movies.'

• A) Change 'enjoys' to 'enjoy'

• B) Change 'to read' to 'reading'

• C) Change 'watching' to 'watch'

• D) No change needed