Writing Revision

How should you introduce evidence?

• By mentioning the author and/or title of article

• By just putting it there with quotes

• By putting the URL

A phrase that is used when moving from one idea to the next is known as a 

• Signal Phrase

• Transitional Phrase

• Topic Sentence

• Parenthetical Citation

What change should be made in the sentence?
It didn't seem like such a small amount would be enough to make a pancake but I soon realized just how much the batter spreads out.

• Change didn't to did'nt

• Insert a comma after pancake

• Change spreads out to spread out

• No changes

My father was very clear about how long to wait. Before trying to flip the pancakes over.
What is the correct way to write these two sentences?

• My father was very clear about this.  How long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear.  About how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear anout this he told me how long to wait beofre trying to flip the pancakes over.

• My father was very clear about how long to wait before trying to flip the pancakes over.

What change needs to be made in the sentence?
I learned that cooking takes more patience and attention to detail then I had ever dreamed!

• Change that to this

• Change takes to take

• Insert a comma after patience

• Change then to than

What change, if any, should be made in the sentence?

• Change the comma to a question mark

• Delete the quotation marks after the comma

• Change eagerly to eager

• Make no changes

Make sure you don't leave any lumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.
What change should be made in sentence 13? 

• Change the comma after lumps to a period

• Change instructed to instrcuting

• Change stired to stirred

• No change should be made

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
"This, ladies and gentlemen," Mr. Taylor announced, "Will be a formative grade."

• Change ladies to lady's

• Change announced to announsed

• Delete the comma after announced

• Change Will to will

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.

• Change few to fewer

• Change breif to brief

• Change the , to a ;

• No change needs to be made

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:
The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

• Change they're to their.

• Change father to Father

• Change they're to there

• Change helped to helping