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When the piece of clothing had been completely folded, the bottom of the machine would open. Attached to the bottom would be a short metal ramp, kind of like a slide. Place a laundry basket at the bottom of this slide you would. The folded piece of clothing would slide down the ramp and would land flat in the basket, folded perfectly. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 15?

• You would place a laundry basket. At the bottom of this slide.

• Place a laundry basket, you would, at the bottom of this slide.

• At the bottom of this slide, you would place a laundry basket.

• You would at the bottom of this slip place a laundry basket.

Choose the sentence with correct use of commas.

• If you do well on STAAR test it will prove you worked hard all year long.

• If, you do well on STAAR test it will prove you worked hard all year long.

• If you do well on STAAR test, it will prove you worked hard all year long.

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus

• change everywhere to every  where

• change dessert to desert

• make no change

What correction can be made to the following sentence?

• Changed played to play

• Change Kaitlyn to kaitlyn

• Add a period after treehouse

• Change the to a

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do.

• Since, I was absent on Tuesday I have a lot of make-up work to do.

• Since I was absent, on Tuesday, I have a lot of make-up work to do.

• Since I was absent on Tuesday, I have a lot, of make-up work to do.

What is the best way to revise the sentence?

• The student was presenting and this is when her phone began to ring.

• Presenting is when her phone began to ring.

• During the student’s presentation; her phone began to ring.

• No change is needed

What change needs to be made in sentence 6?

• Change frys to fries

• Change basket to baskets

• Change Puffs to Puffes

• Sentence 6 should not be changed.

What is the best way to revise the sentence: 'The teacher said that the students should read the book, and then they should write a report on it.'?

• A) The teacher said that the students should read the book and then write a report on it.

• B) The teacher said that the students should read the book, then they should write a report on it.

• C) The teacher said that the students should read the book; and then they should write a report on it.

• D) The teacher said that the students should read the book, and then, they should write a report on it.

Choose the sentence with correct use of commas.

• A) After the test, we went to the park to relax.

• B) After, the test we went to the park to relax.

• C) After the test we went, to the park to relax.

• D) After the test we, went to the park to relax.

What change, if any, needs to be made to the sentence: 'The principle announced that there would be a meeting after school.'?

• A) Change principle to principal

• B) Change announced to announces

• C) Change meeting to meet

• D) Make no change