The following questions will ask you to compare the original wording of Grimes poem to the TERRIBLE reworded version of the poem. You will need to explain why the reworded section is not as effective as the original.
ORIGINAL: when I'm around
REWORD: when I am nearby
Explain why the original is a better word choice than the reword. Make sure you go back to the poems and think about how the word fits into the whole picture.