Paragraph Editing Practice

I've had a terrible cold about several days.

• for several days.

• for days several.

• during several days.

• Correct as is.

Then I drive the kids to school. I work in the fields all the day.

• the fields during day.

• the fields all day.

• the fields day.

• Correct as is.

Fix this sentence: My favorite color red.

• My favorite color are red.

• My favorite color red.

• My favorite color is red.

• My favorite color were red.

Fix?  I’m super excited to going Sierra Vista.

• I’m super excited to going Sierra Vista.

• I’m super exciting to going Sierra Vista.

• I’m super excited to go to Sierra Vista.

• I’m super excited to going to Sierra Vista.

What is the correct way to write sentence 1?

• Despite graduating from school years ago. Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently, whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

• Despite graduating from school years ago, Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently, whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

• Despite graduating from school years ago Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently. Whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

• Despite graduating from school years ago, Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently; whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

What is wrong with the format of the paragraph? 
Hi everyone my name is Steve I have lot of hobbies.
I like to play soccer and basketball. I like all kind of sports because it´s fun.
I also like math I like the problem of the math.
I´m not that good at English but not bad at English.
I hope to good at English i´m going to study hard!!

• nothing

• sentences are a list not together in a paragraph

• too short

• too long

fix? I will do well in there because I have some skills and talents.

•  I will do well in there because I have some skills and talents.

•  I will do well there because I have some skills and talents.

•  I will do well for there because I have some skills and talents.

PE is a very differents class and is very important class too.

• PE is a very differents class and is very important class too.

• PE were a very differents class and is very important class too.

• PE is a very different class, and it is a very important class too.

• PE is a very differenting class and is very important class too.

What word could be used to make this sentence longer? I believe Venado is a good school.

• when

• if

• because

• for

What error? My name is Natalie and I will go to Venado I Believe Venado is a good school and I can make a lot of friends.

• none

• fragment

• run-on sentence