Editing Sentences Quiz

Leah has not used the best choice of words in sentence 1. What change should she make?

• Change rely to remain

• Change communicate to connect

• Change conduct to improve

• Change transitions to transactions

What is the best way to edit sentence 3? 

• Change has to have

• Add a comma after evolved

• Change become to became

• No edit is needed

Leah would like to provide extra detail to support the ideas in the first paragraph (sentences 1-6). Read the following quotations and analyze the information presented in each. Which quotation would be best to insert after sentence 6?

• In recent years, organizations have implemented advanced cybersecurity frameworks that not only protect against modern threats but also reinforce older systems with new layers of defense.

• Cybersecurity is the practice of protecting computer systems, networks, and data from cyber threats, unauthorized access, and attacks.

• It involves implementing security measures such as encryption, firewalls, and authentication protocols to safeguard sensitive information.

• With the increasing reliance on digital technology, cybersecurity is essential for individuals, businesses, and governments to ensure data privacy and system integrity.

What is the most effective edit to make in sentence 9?

• With the rise of cyber threats such as phishing, ransomware and data breaches. The need for strong security measures has never been greater.

• With the rise of cyber threats such as phishing, ransomware, and data breaches, the need for strong security measures has never been greater.

• However, the rise of cyber threats such as phishing, ransomware and data breaches, the need for strong security measures has never been greater.

• With the rise of cyber threats such as phishing, ransomware, and data breaches; the need for strong security measures has never been greater.

What is the most effective way to combine sentence 11 and 12?

• Over the years, however, hackers developed more sophisticated techniques, making traditional security measures less effective.

• Over the years, hackers developed more sophisticated techniques, which is making traditional security measures less effective.

• Traditional security measures were made less effective over the years, so hackers developed more sophisticated techniques.

• Hackers developed more sophisticated techniques, over the years, this made traditional security measures less effective.

Leah does not use the best choice of words in sentence 17. What change should she make?

• Change vulnerabilities to vulnerabilitys

• Change exposed to exploited

• Change carefully to careful

• Change prevent to prove

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 20?

• Change algorithms to algorithm

• Insert a comma afer activity

• Change while to when

• No change is needed

What change is needed in sentence 23?

• Change are promising to is promising

• Remove the comma after promising

• Change with experts to while experts

• No change is needed

What change needs to be made in sentence 1?

• Change Literature to literature

• Change uses to use

• Insert a comma after moral

• Change animals to animal’s

What change should be made in sentence 10?

• Change safer to more safer

• Change was enclosed to were enclosed

• Change to make to this was supposed to make

• No change should be made.