Revising Editing Friday

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 15?

• A Insert a comma after cameras

• B Change hooked to hooking

• C Change elephants tusks to elephants’ tusks

• D No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

• A Change wondered to wandered

• B Change wheather to whether

• C Change clear to clearer

• D No change needs to be made.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1C

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What change needs to be made in sentence 19?

• A Change were to was

• B Change impressive to impresive

• C Change the comma to a semicolon

• D Change realistic to realism

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What is the correct way to write sentence 22?

• A Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. Deer standing still and allowing the cameras to film them.

• B Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams, deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

• C Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams. While deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

• D Curious monkeys reached out for the tusk-cams, while deer stood still and allowed the cameras to film them.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 25?

• A Change the comma after added to a period

• B Change It to it

• C Change world to World

• D No change should be made in sentence 25.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Which of the following is a correctly punctuated complex sentence?

• After, I got home from school, I walked the dog, put away laundry, and finished my homework.
• After I got home from school, I walked the dog, put away laundry, and finished my homework.
• After I got home from school I walked the dog, put away laundry, and finished my homework.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

What change should be made in sentence 3?

(3) Leaves brush against your windows and the chirps of birds echo through your room.

• Change Leaves to Leafes

• Change brush to brushes

• Insert a comma after windows

• Change through to threw

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

What change should be made to sentence 18?

(18) In Sweden their is a tree house hotel that is shaped like a bird’s nest.

• Change their to there

• Insert a comma after hotel

• Change shaped to shape

• Change bird’s to birds

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What is the correct way to write sentence 22?

(22) The Frio River Treetop is closer to home it is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer. To home, it is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer to home. It is located near Leakey, Texas.

• The Frio River Treetop is closer to home as a result it is located, near Leakey, Texas.

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2

What is the correct way to write sentence 10?

(10) One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of an air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring. Happening to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, and called a bubble ring. Then it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

• One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle. It is called a bubble ring, and it happens to be the perfect sea toy.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F