Thesis Statement Review

True or False: It is okay to quote someone else in my thesis statement.

• True

• False

What is a thesis statement?

• a statement that tells the reader the point/main idea of your paper

• A suggestion that the reader should read the essay

• A question that is being answered

Which one is a REASON that supports having school uniforms?

• Mr. Hoops believes uniforms will not reduce fights.

• School uniforms will help our school and students.

• 40% of parents are unemployed.

• All students would be seen and treated equally.

Which reason is TOO SIMILAR to this one?

Reason: Kids won't wear school uniforms.

• Students don't like the uniform style.

• Kids cannot afford uniforms.

• Uniforms will not improve student behavior.

• Kids can't get uniforms at local stores.

True or False: The thesis statement should express a main idea that links to supporting points in the body paragraphs.

• True

• False

Which of the following is a strong thesis statement?

• Violent video games can be beneficial for young people to play.

• Violent video games are harmful to young people, and it should be stopped.

• Violent video games are harmful for young people to play because it promotes a sedentary lifestyle, encourages violence, and can cause children to become desensitized to death.

• Violent video games can help young people develop problem-solving skills.

True or False: When I write my thesis statement, I need to take a stand!

• True

• False

What is the Thesis Statement Formula?

• Introduction + a quote or paraphrase + conclusion

• Why I chose the topic + why it is a great topic + personal connection to the topic

• Question + Research + Answer

• Claim + 3 reasons why I'm right

True or False: The three reasons should be unique and different from each other.

• True

• False

Is this thesis statement strong?

Stress in the fast-food workplace has led to serious problems for employees, including psychological, physical, and emotional problems.

• Strong

• Needs improvement