Writing Revision staar 2019

Which is the best way to combine sentences 7 and 8?

• He didn’t see any that he liked because he talked with his grandmother.

• He didn’t see any that he liked, even though he talked with his grandmother.

• He didn’t see any that he liked, so he talked with his grandmother.

• He didn’t see any that he liked when he talked with his grandmother.

Which transition is best to add to the beginning of sentence 15 ?

• However

• Therefore

• After all

• Soon

Darla needs to add a topic sentence for the fourth paragraph (sentences 16–19).
Which sentence should be added just before sentence 16 as the topic sentence
for this paragraph?

• From there, Mo’s Bows became very popular.

• Eventually, Mo needed help with his business.

• Mo was excited about starting the company.

• Mo sold some bows to a few people.

Which change can Darla make to improve the clarity of sentence 31?

• Change them to young people.

• Change what to things.

• Change they to you

• No revision is needed in this sentence.

  
  

Do you think Mo's business was successful? Explain why or why not

write in complete sentences.

describe the types of bow ties that Mo was making?