Cave of Crystals: Editing Passage

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 8?

• Change Classified to classified

• Delete the comma after crystals

• Change translucent to transluscent

• No change is needed.

What change should Jazmin make in sentence 11?

• Delete the comma after fault

• Change break to brake

• Change tektonic to tectonic

• Change have shifted to have shifts

What change should be made in sentence 19?

• Change minerallogical to mineralogical

• Delete the comma after discovery

• Change exploring to explore

• Change them to it

What is the correct way to write sentences 21 and 22?

• If there is a shocking cave like this: 980 feet below the surface of Mexico then there could be more discoveries just like it in other parts of the world.

• If there is a shocking cave like this 980 feet below the surface of Mexico; then there could be more discoveries just like it in other parts of the world.

• If there is a shocking cave like this 980 feet below the surface of Mexico then there could be more discoveries, just like it, in other parts of the world.

• If there is a shocking cave like this 980 feet below the surface of Mexico, then there could be more discoveries just like it in other parts of the world.

What change should Jazmin make in sentence 23?

• Change There are to There’s

• Change have to has

• Delete the comma after eyes

• Change dazzeling to dazzling