Revising for Objective Tone

The video tutorial teaches how to revise writing for an objective tone by analyzing word choices. It begins with an introduction to the concept of objective tone and its importance in academic writing. The lesson outlines a writing prompt and the steps in the writing process, emphasizing the need for an objective tone. It explains tone as a writer's attitude and provides examples to distinguish between subjective and objective tones. The tutorial details steps to revise writing for objectivity, including re-reading text, brainstorming word connotations, and revising words to reduce emotional influence. A practical example is provided to illustrate the process, followed by a recap of the lesson.

What is the main goal of revising for an objective tone?

• To use complex vocabulary

• To express personal opinions clearly

• To ensure writing is free from personal emotions

• To make writing more entertaining

Which of the following best describes an objective tone?

• Sarcastic and witty

• Neutral and unbiased

• Emotional and passionate

• Cheerful and enthusiastic

What does the term 'objective' mean in the context of writing?

• Influenced by personal feelings

• Highly subjective

• Based on factual information

• Full of personal opinions

What is the first step in revising for an objective tone?

• Writing a new draft

• Eliminating emotional words

• Re-reading the text for tone words

• Brainstorming feelings

How can you identify words that show tone in your writing?

• By finding words with multiple meanings

• By checking for complex words

• By counting the number of adjectives

• By looking for words that express emotions

In the example given, why is the word 'poor' considered to show tone?

• It describes financial status

• It implies a need for pity

• It is a common adjective

• It is a neutral term

What is the purpose of brainstorming what tone words make you feel?

• To identify personal biases

• To improve vocabulary

• To enhance emotional expression

• To create a list of synonyms

What should you do if a verb in your writing shows too much emotion?

• Use it to emphasize your point

• Ignore it

• Add more emotional words

• Replace it with a more neutral verb

Why is it important to eliminate words that provoke strong feelings?

• To maintain an objective tone

• To simplify the language

• To make the text more engaging

• To increase word count

What is the final step in revising for an objective tone?

• Publishing the essay

• Revising the draft

• Eliminating emotional words

• Brainstorming new ideas